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摘要
A man reincarnates into marvel with a tech system
Infinity stones change the universe
this story was Inspired by Marvel in between flesh and steel: Author: Shinydecapod
And
Marvel: tech system: Author Unknown_by_all
No One 17 and Under Admitted
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the overall storyline is very good, the MC character is also in line with main stream as it is not insane like batman and not killing maniac like Yun Che. it a gem for a marvel/Dc fanfiction. which is a rare quality as it merge the two in an ok manner.
Story line is good . This is too fast paced. Things are happening fast and people are accepting them easily. It needs to show down and many chapters are needed to be added inbetween to make this story better.