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Peter Parker agent, gets superpowers from a spider. When he becomes a superhero, his villains try to attack him. Peter Parker gets a multiverse machine from his work. He updates the machine and uses it. When he uses it and he gets stuck in the Multiverse. Will Peter come back from the multiverse?
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Wow, thats the worse story i have ever read. Very poor grammer. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😷😷😷😷😷😷🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴
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I only write this as a request, please edit this story so it can be redable, because this mess with giant blooks of text are not enjoyable to read at all... Idk about the story though so good luck for anyone willing to dig through that.
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