/ Book&Literature / Man Against Gods (ATG)
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A modern man reborn into World of Cultivation, reaching the top in his own unique way...
(Alternative World, replacing original MC, Original powers, Grey MC, self-made Mc)
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I don’t see how this is rated so high. This is one of the worst fanfics I’ve ever read. MC looks down on ppl in the cultivation world which I’m okay with. But then suddenly he meets the Phoenix village and acts all chummy with them. Cmon author at least make his character consistent. Another thing I hate is how the author chooses to make the sister suffer a tragedy just so MC can be ‘grey character’ but in reality he’s just an arrogant prick. The author said in a footnote that some young master in the clan was jealous and made his sister a servant. And going by typical cultivation world young master standards, she probably was either r*ped or tortured before being killed. None of these are clarified, however, because the beginning is so f*cking vague . Literally the MC just says he killed the sect to take revenge. And that’s it. No details no nothing. Overall it’s a really frustrating read only for those who are ok with bad grammar, inconsistent character, and vague plot. However keep in mind that I’ve haven’t read too many chapters so author might’ve gotten better later on in the story. Who knows? This was just too sh*tty for me to continue so I had to drop it and rant here in the reviews.
After reading upto chapter 10 i hate the mc already. He disliked the young master arrogance but he was more arrogant than them. And then he was like. Too cocky when he was fighting weak enemies and say theres no challenge on it. But when he face stronger enemies he used poison lol. That was stupid He wants more battle challenhe then when
Fantastic fanfic. Not in the canon town. Adds a interesting twist , first few chaps are iffy but once you get past it you see the the connection to story and timeline , very good . Need more to read
Pretty much the author tells us everything and nothing is written out into detail. We got a hypocrite MC who magically becomes stronger and murders others for no good reason. Apparently he is the smartest person in the world and knows how to cultivate correctly. Thats not all either, the MC doesn't even save his sister after killing those who provided for him. This fic is worse than the general chinese fics. At least they have a proper story.
Mc waste his time building house for two months for no reason with no progress at cultivation. WTH, even bast*rd yun che would train desperately and jump realms in two months. He lift curse in a village for "alliance" even though he let her sister to be used by anyone and there's no further info about her even though author made mc destroy the sect but he leaves the sister and never mention it again in the story.
I've read other stories of this author, so I can honestly say that it's very visible that it's the first fanfic. Grammar is worse and the MC is unbearable - he is a true hypocrite and a typical young master.
Stories interesting but dont make MC a cultivation idiot-ie: a person that shows off, is stupid and dosnt think **** through, so far its dosnt seem like MC is an idiot so yah, dont do it,,,smart calculative secretive MCs' are always dope. It would be interesting to read about the MC using modern knowledge for his advantage, like using physics, chem and bio for his attacks cultivation or some ****, would be cool Also just saying, the way MC is screaming out attacks is pretty stupid, IDK its weird, maybe not do it, plus its a weakness [ i hope I dont have to explain why its a weakness].... add some romance and fluff, just build it and dont make it retarded or cliche or shallow or some separation ****, and pls dont make harem massive. and no wives or moms Also dude, gave you one star for CD cause, I dont really think a child that got saved from kidnapping would be that friendly or open, or even would want to play with a stranger..so yah...try to build your CD, cause no offense right now its pretty much non-existent, [ by CD I mean relationships] **: what happened to the family and the sis? [Also the sis, you said that she became a servant to someone right?...kinda stupid cause MC was a genius under an elder, dude could've just protected sis---dont make mistakes like this.........no bash, just saying] anyway GL, dont make this cliche [just suggestions]
This is the best ATG fanfic you can read. He switch out Jasmine with Ying'er which in my opinion was something new and fresh.. And for all you Yunche haters there is no Yunche here, so rejoice. + Him not knowing the plot makes it better. This fanfic has just the right amount of faceslaping, romance and action. The Canon girls are much more lovable here specially Qingyue she's changing for the best. 👍 Keep up the daily updates author. Thank you for giving us this amazing fanfic.
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This novel is best fanfiction I have ever read. Don’t be discouraged by its seemingly generic beginning. Trust me, after 10 chapter the story’s beginning explains itself and the story just explodes in amazing was. The plot is developed very well and twisted here and there to match the story while keeping it really fresh. The characters are all fleshed out really well and the Mc is smart. All in All just ENJOY THIS MASTERPIECE
Hands down one of the best atg fanfics out there...quite original since our dear protagonist doesn't follow usual methods of powering up...just has the right amount of everything that makes this novel entertaining to read...I hope this continues until the very end...keep up the great work author-san
The beginning of the story is enjoyable for me but the recent chapters are basically pointless to read since it all boils down to 1.talk about how pathetic everyone is compared to the mc 2.dual cultivate with some women more powerful than him and his harem and then gain some cultivation realms 3.take over a place in seconds flat while being highly overkill 4.another lemon 5.get a new harem member 6.rinse and repeat.
I'm okay with him questioning cultivation which zillions of civilizations in atg universe use so mc is really unique and one of a kind genius who masters formations while only taking two years in a sect, but what I really think is stupid borderline retardation is how he is in a chinese civilization and he thinks "Stake" (STEAK) which is just grilled meat could be considered unique or delicious by chinese.. I'm guessing its a westerner who thought steak and mashed potatoes is food that cant be reached by chinese...
The writing is quite good (when compared to most stories on here). I also really like the plot idea. Every single ATG story we see is just Yun che bashing running around picking up xia qingyue. This one mixed it up a bit. It does have a lot of issues though. The MC can be described in three words. Pretentious As Fuck. It's incredibly annoying to read. He yells out his attacks, gives his attacks really grandiose names and looks down on EVERYONE. If the author read the story, he should know that higher cultivation levels up everything from intelligence to senses. There's no way some 12 y/o with barely any cultivation would be killing sky level beasts... I never thought I would see an MC more obnoxious than Yun Che but here we are. Story is also really confusing. There's a sister that is constantly talked about for the first 10 chapters but we don't see her at all? What's his goal?? He spends a chapter lecturing some goddess that's far far above him in strength, and at the end she's trying to seduce him? Lol, that's what made me drop the story. The story had a neat idea but it's clear to see there was no real plan and that the author is just writing it as he goes. I will say that this is still better than 80% of the stories on this site. Give it a try if you're bored.
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Best fan fic and I test read this from chapter 1 to latest and its great with a smart MC and harem with unique personalities.. ✌😁❤❤❤❤
I honestly didnt like the first 15 or so chapters for various reasons but the Story becomes really good the formations, pills how the character develops honestly this is one of the best ATG ff i have read
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Author you are absolute Genious this truly a great fan fic & after reading this fan fic I am not going back to any other ATG fan fic...💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
This story is a fresh breath of aor. Like seriously, how come reincarnated people dont question the stupidity of the cultivators. But the MC here actually rebukes and is annoyed by that. This is a great fanfic. Keep it up.