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摘要
Synopsis: Mama's Child Vol 1: Early Life (Completed)
—Short version—
There's something big about cakes, and Jake is just nine months away from figuring out what, when finds himself in One Piece.
—Long version—
Jake's life takes a drastic turn when he is thrust into the belly of the beast. Nine months later, he is welcomed into the powerful family of Big Mom, the feared Emperor of the Sea who eats souls for snacks.
In this world of Sea Kings, Marines, and Pirates, blessed with his mother's physical strength and his extensive knowledge of One Piece, watch as Jake becomes one of Luffy's most impossible villains.
—-Story Progression—
Note: Each volume is a standalone story.
#1. VOLUME 1: Early Life - Chronicles Jake’s birth, featuring hypothetical scenarios with a focus on Action & Drama.
#2. VOLUME 2: WOG - Set sixteen years after Jake’s birth, this volume follows Jake/Keki as he reigns over Totto Land, leads the Big Mom Pirates, and stands as an Emperor of the Sea, challenging Luffy’s ambitions. Independent of Volume 1, this volume explores canonical characters & events, and delves into Slice of Life elements. Available on Patreon.
—Disclaimer—
I own nothing but my character and plot.
—Book/Author support—
Patreon.com/cursedmillennial
Kofi.com/kai-10
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Estou muito interessado nesta história, talvez você possa fazer ele ter o físico da big mom ou ser um lunariano ou alguma coisa do tipo...................
Imagine having the kindest, most-loving, and selfless mother in the world. That's what this is about. Or is it? There's only one way to find out. Mama...mama, out!
Creo que seré la primera crítica mala :v No me gusta el giro que esta tomando la historia, no se si es porque se supone que el MC era solo un adolescente antes pero no es muy inteligente, ni mucho menos decisivo, claramente nota que le ocultan algo, que lo están manipulando, pero es muy pasivo. No se si al ritmo que va esto el MC será completamente consumido? Debería agregarse una etiqueta de villano a la historia?. De por si la sinopsis no daba mucha idea de que esperar. Con eso dicho la escritura es buena y lo uno que puedo recalcar de ella es que aveces entre capítulos se hace una reiteración, casi llamemosla spam al iniciar otro capitulo, algo no muy común y totalmente innecesario ya que si uno quisiera leer lo mismo dos veces solo bastaría con devolverse un capitulo
I really feel like if you continue writing you’ll just move up to become my favorite one piece fic, cause I’ve never seen a fit where the mum character is going to be using mainly haki
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