摘要
Luna isn't just a simple girl. Others might perceive her as such but this book smart person is hiding something deep in her mind. She promised to hide it forever and lived as a normal person would but some force didn't want to waste such talent.
One unlucky day, she found herself in a mysterious place untouched by the modern stuff she's familiar with. The people wear weird clothes, the houses looked old-style, and everything is so simple.
It might look simple on the surface but that world had always been full of mysteries hidden deep within and waiting to be found.
The place is just like her.
She did her best to keep her secrets but the longer she lived there, the harder it is to hide her secrets in the dark.
"There's no helping it, let's just embrace the truth," she uttered.
"Keep it easy, young lady," a man in his deep, cold voice appeared behind.
"Alright"
"B-but get away from me"
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MAJOR WIZARD OF OZ VIBES LOL, but with a modern twist, I love it so far, Akiro's character especially is so intriguing! Luna's journey seems really interesting, cant wait for more!!!
Luna is an incredible protagonist and seeing how she interacts in the new world she is in really separates this story from generic different world stories.
I didn't read the synopsis but started the story. The story didn't disappoint me. I kept reading as it was interesting. I specillay enjoyed Luna's character. Kinda cute.
I love how you describe every detail of your story. The characters, backgrounds, and story building are well described, so we can get into the story. It's hooked! This story is impressive! I love Luna by the way 🤣 Keep it up, author! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I usually don't read romance, but this story got me interested, interesting characters and the world.
Ok, I absolutely loved the first few chapters of this book. I am trying to figure out how to add it to my library on my laptop. You just set a world where the reader can immerse, and feel like they are there with Luna. I found myself smiling at the little things in the very beginning. I hope that continues throughout this book. I'm a lover of little cliches! I've had to write many reviews, but this is definitely one of my favorite books I've read so far. Can't wait to read more! Good luck dear author!
Bravo fellow author, the words were perfect and I found no typos, the detail you put into describing many things was simplistic but it was able to convey your ideas, good job and may your novel be famous.
This is one of the best books I've read in a while!!!!! I just read the first five chapters and I'm already hooked! I can't wait to read more!!!! keep it up!!
And one more hidden gem added to my collection *evil smile* Muahahahahh. It is full of charming description thaht hook you time and time again, wanted to read more, to experience this new world with Luna our MC ! Updates are high so don't miss this Fantasy because I know you'll love it ! a 5 stars here
This story is off to a slow start but it becomes interesting chapter after chapter! It has magic and a great imaginary world😄 I want to point out your detailed writing, author😊 You do a great job on that! Keep up the good work!!
I love the language used !! I like how well Akiro and Luna are portrayed . I makes me wanna read more . I like the magical vibes too . All the best . [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is beautiful. Nice job, i love how you build the character. Wish you the best for your future and your next project. The way you describe it is wonderful. Good luck!
Very enjoyable read by an Author who has clearly put a lot of passion into their writing. Regular updates and plenty of chapters to binge through! Have some stars!
The beginning of this story really sucks you in, it sets up for a lot of different paths for the story to take. Love Luna as a character, the world building is very detailed and the main concepts are really interesting. Overall, great read!
The plot is interesting! Really like the combination of fantasy and magic! I still in early chapter but so far, I love how you describe the characters, the world settings, and I'm very curious about her journey in the future chapters. 💕💕
This novel is awesome! The synopsis is very interesting. The language that the author used is also beautiful. I love how the author describes the characters' interaction and world background. It felt like I was really there. I have been already hooked up after reading a few chapters and would like to find out more about the novel's mysteries. I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author!
I added this book to my library so I could finish reading it☺️ World traveling stories are the ones that will always break your heart in the end. I like the plot so far it keeps you wanting to read on and see how things are going to play out. Your naturally talented at telling a story because this is just flowing smoothly. Keep up the great work author 🎉
Nice story plot. the synopsis is an eye catching, I like the discription and the bold characters the author has built. I enjoy Luna's personality and her journey is exciting leaving the reders with curiosity on how the story will unfold. I encountered some grammer erros and the shift in tense that confused me a bit but can be easily fixed. but those do not overshine the gem you have here. keep improving 👍
This story... . . . . . . . . . . is such a GEM!!! It has a generic world travel genre but I don't know what kind of magic this book has and it captures me to read more of the chapters. I love how the characters especially Luna portray well. The world background is also good. It really feels like I'm with Luna in Vermillion. I'm still on chap 10 but I would continue reading it tonight! So no spoilers! I found something to binge read again! Kudos to the author. This story is great. Keep it up!!!!
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