/ Book&Literature / Magiscape (Harry Potter)
摘要
One tragic event leaves Harry and Lily to hide away from the wizarding world. And when they return, not everything is the same as it was before. But they have an unusual power to survive. To thrive. To stand above everyone else, and etch their name in the history forever. It is Magiscape. OP Harry. Harry/multi. Incest.
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- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I read the book on fanfiction and i have a question, is Tracy going to get together with the MC, if not isn't the Whole development between Harry and Tracy kinda not worth it?
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Well, it's quite good, but this is just the Harry Potter story with some extra elements like his mother and the magic they got, and his personality. Overall, the story is boring. I would rather read the original Harry Potter books because this novel is kind of boring. I'm on chapter 10 and I feel like I'm wasting my time. You said OP Harry, but I don't see him being OP. He seems quite weak from what I can see. I will keep reading up to chapter 30, but I hope to see some changes soon.
You write very well. And the story is well crafted. Good job.