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He used to live life on the run. Given a second chance in a new world, Naruto learns what it means to work with a team and be a hero.
Story written by Crohn's Colitis but was abandoned by the author several years ago. Hopefully I will be able to build upon the story.
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Awesome story, but you should take it easy on urself like only write 1 or 2 stories at the same time. Naruto in dc and Supreme spider-man take it easy.
Another great story that's going along great then BAM!! no more updates, on hiatus, waiting for someone else to pick it up. It's sad. 😿 I want MORE!!! Please continue. At least don't leave on a cliffhanger. I hate that. 😾 There were some wrong words and typos, but overall great story.
please update this novel it's a great novel and I would love to see more of it so please update it. 👍🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
So far, everything is copied. I will rate this book 5 stars when you actually add to the chapter count. If you were planning to continue this novel, you would have uploaded all 23 chapters at once, and continued from there, but you didn't. You upload them once or twice every day. That is telling me that you are buying time because you have no idea how to continue the novel.
More plz I really Ike the Story. His character development is awesome just waiting for him to understand the world he’s living in. Like using technology and knowing weaknesses of other villains and heroes . Hood you continue.
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it's interesting 🧐🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷🍷
muito foda continue plz [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
because he joined back the team.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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the original author of this ff stop writing at chapter 22-23 i think...if i remember correctly. I hope you can do it better than the previous author and i shall invest all my power stone to this ff. Good luck author and don't push yourself too much. One step at a time.
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I like it, I like it very much, hopefully the story will continue and not end in the middle of the way if the love story will be better too, however hopefully it will not be Megan or Canary.
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I support you Homie. Go activate Sicko Mode. Bring all of you' scrap and greatness. Do not Dilly and show me you' willy. Ninja Ghost Style.
This is my favourite DC Naruto. The One thing that bugged me is that the author stopped right before finishing season 1. Wish you luck bro. And Naruto x Zatanna Please.