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"Luciana's life is turned upside down when her foster parents, who murdered her real parents, rob her of her rightful heritage as empress. Subjected to a lifetime of mistreatment and betrayal, Luciana becomes wary of trusting others and determines to achieve her goals alone. However, her life takes a devastating turn when she catches her sister cheating with her boyfriend. Returning home to clear her head, she's faced with an unbearable reality: she's forced to marry a bankrupt billionaire to save her family's business, replacing her sister who was originally intended for the arrangement. With no other choice, Luciana signs the contract to protect her best friend, the only person who has ever shown her kindness. Unbeknownst to her, the 'bankrupt' billionaire is actually a rapidly rising trillionaire, and their contract marriage will lead Luciana to discover her true identity and reclaim her rightful heritage."
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i can't believe Richard used her and dumped her for step sister Jennifer. so heartbreaking. this story is quite interesting and i recommend it to readers.
I always dislike women fighting over a worthless man. If she had given the man the slap and walked out with dignity, I would have rated full stars.
I love this book so much I won't like🥰. I would unlock more chapters definitely 😁
This is a good read altogether; that is if you take away the too much repetition of 'I'. it almost gave me a headache.. smiles keep up the good work writer
This is indeed a book that got me hooked. It was worth every bit of my time☺️
I've fallen in love with Luciana. The story is good, the start was great, the emotions are well portrayed but you need to work on your past tense and present tense so we the readers won't get confused.
Betrayal from the one you call sister can be the worst. Jennifer is a heartless b*ch!
First of all, I want to congratulate you. You’ve managed to create an atmosphere full of intense emotions, and that’s one of the strongest points of your story. Luciana is very well-developed in terms of her pain and inner conflicts, and the dialogue flows naturally, which adds realism to the scenes. Also, the plot of betrayal and secrets is quite intriguing and keeps the reader hooked. However, there are a few details you could refine to improve the flow. I noticed that in some parts, you switch between present and past tense, which can confuse the reader a bit. Also, while the emotions are well captured, there are moments where more detailed descriptions of the setting or actions are missing, which would help immerse the reader even more in the story. Lastly, in some moments of high tension, like Luciana’s confrontation with Jennifer and Richard, you could delve deeper into what she’s feeling in that moment to make the impact even stronger. In summary, the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments in narrative consistency and descriptions, you could take it to another level. 👌
Nice work Author, I'm just a few chapters in and i can say your work is worth admiring, I'm definitely continuing. kudos Author👍
Very good story and great characters Love it