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Tamaki Hiroto died and got transmigrated to the same guy with the same name in another world. He got a system, but he wants to have fun with his new life from then on.
English was our 2nd language and was terrible at it. Don't read it if you don't want to see bad grammar.
The main world is from the love live series. Meanwhile, there would be a crossover of some anime characters from different anime but not too much.
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Wasn’t bad until the mother chapter and you find out that his parents abandoned him when he was young to pursue their own dreams and then once he got older the mom showed up randomly and he just accepts her even though for years he ignored her and was cold to her(was the previous body) and he has those memories and emotions but he’s a beta... not for me
The story in overall are really good, on point of preference maybe The start are a bit slow but can make im something Nice 🤔 at least arent rushing but could pace a bit more or make The chap a bit longer 🤔 even so IF making this little change mess up your pace and you could t follow as then is good The way are 🤔🙌😁
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This is an update from my previous review that was made at reading status 61 (one month ago). Well there is for-shadowing about a possible harem...but not holding my breath right now. The writing, stability, and story itself is great, but if you came here for a REAL harem you need to wait on reading this for a while. Once again if I find a second girlfriend or any kind of harem I will then delete this and my previous gripe-ping post and let you know we have a harem green light!
Meh, it’s readable and good for wasting time. The MC is too beta sometimes, hope that changes....................................................
I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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The fanfic was very good at the beginning but as I contunied to read I get bored because all of the chapters are like fillers just being with "kaichou" takes 4 chapters good idea but bad story development.
For a reincarnated 25yo orphan, the protagonist doesn’t seem wiser than any other regular 16yo. Also a bit too much of a perfect nice guy like a certain simular chinese novel. The tsundere is too much of a tsundere (like in 75% of her sentences and actions). I find the mc fixation on her annoying because it isn’t like he said he liked tsunderes the most in his previous life. He is surrounded by anime tropes and he has barely any comments on them, or what he think of them. Finally, I’m sick of harems in name only (ending with a single lover, or no resolution at all). And it seems to be going that way. While I like the story, the protagonist sometimes tires me, making it difficult to read the following chapters.
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Pls update soon T-T !! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
I love this story, although I would like the friend to stop bothering a little but for the rest great. The only thing that I ask Kirisu to the harem !!!!!!!!
I'm really enjoying it so far but I'm confused about something author is this a harem where they are all in a relationship or like kiritos from SAO where he is in a relationship and the others just like him
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I genuinely enjoy this story. It's kind of like the ones that akikan40 has written, but better. Gaining skills from a system and generally being super competent at things is something I have a surprising amount of fun reading. I also like how it's kind of slow burning the romance portion, there is actual effort being put into the relationships, rather than the usual cheap quick relationships we see around here. Well done! Thank you very much for writing this! Seeing updates for it tends to make my day! Ten out of ten, would highly recommend! This is one of the better fanfics on this site! Give it a read!
Pure wish fulfilment but it's pretty damm enjoyable. Since it's slice of life, I really enjoy the slower pace. I also like how the authors are taking their time building the harem instead of this stupid love at first sight crap. Takeshi and Yasuo are pretty damn annoying though, they remind of of Issei's two perverted friends. Just a note to the authors : you better include milf in the harem or I will make sure the both of you die painfully. 😅 Add Eli too...
Uhg....they are sloooooowly considering a harem here..Its all because of his girlfriend! I mean males are a declined population.......well I will sum up his girlfriend for ya. Maki pinched his waist, Maki pinched his waist, Maki pinched his waist, Maki pinched his waist, Maki pinched his waist, Maki pinched his waist, ect ect ect..... Still trying to hold out hope here...........
The story is slow paced, which depending of your preference can be bad or good. I personally like the pace. There are few small spelling and grammar mistakes, can be easily fixed. The updates are pretty frequent so far. Obviously, the story is in it's initial stage so there isn't a lot of character depth.
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I am very glad that there is another author who thought of writing this type of fanfic since I'veonly found a few on this website and have grown to enjoy them! I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing and I hope that you do not suddenly drop this and if you do, I recommend that you notify your readers. Ciao
100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, 100 squats, and a 10k-run. . . . Shameless review.. . . .. Well, its very hard to create a novel especially if you are not that good at english. We really try our best to create the most out of the scenes, and well~,we sometimes get overboard in the process and it leads to longer paragraphs or conversation. We also need to re-edit and polish every chap. So yeah, i dont have anymore rants for now, the novel is still at its beginning. We'll see were would this novel go.
One of the fanfics i wish had more frequent updates, I hate how fanfics work, most fanfics with lots of updates are sh!t but the ones that are good either get dropped or have almost non-existent or slow updates.