/ Sci-fi / Lost Light (Work in Progress)
摘要
( Sci-Fi/High Fantasy.)
The Alteon Solar System is beautiful and dangerous...
Haunted by the remnants of a Pre-Empire civilization wiped out by a Calamity. Preyed upon by a dark and hated organization known simply as Villatox.
Home to mystical creatures born long ago by the powerful Rayon, the deity-like beings who created all life in this Solar System. Five planets full of unique and vibrant races and cultures.
...All of it is being threatened by a dark and vile force, even the god-like Rayon cannot hope to defeat alone. They already failed once. Now after thousands of years the protective barrier placed around the borders of the solar system are failing.
(I am an amateur writer, but I have had this idea floating around my head so I figured why not to bring it life! World Buidling and creation is no easy feat I tell ya. Keep in mind that both the story and Lore are currently works in progress and are as such subjected to edits and reworks. Any suggestions or advice from you wonderful readers will be greatly appreciated.
Ask and question the story, leave a comment or two ! Maybe one of your suggestions or Ideas could have an influence on the Story and Lore itself!
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You need some rearrangement. Put the first vol in the auxiliary section and start the prologue from vol 1. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Ok, I think there are some important things to mention... Basically, everything is a combination of structure and new concepts about the world in which everything takes place, and that you have to understand to enjoy the story more, although it is still possible learn them as the plot progresses. You should give it a try and give your opinion if these types of stories are to your liking.
Shameless Review! Got the World built... that was fun! Have a semi-plotted storyline in my head. No preplaned chapters. They just spew out my head like a Water fountain. I really hope you'll enjoy stepping into the sea of stars I've created. (I also really suck at math so don't expect any of that sci-fi number accuracy stuff lol)