/ Book&Literature / Lost Artefacts | A Game of Thrones fic
摘要
Roberts rebellion goes on a lot longer than usual, Jon is two years older than Robb, he finds that he can no longer stay in his home so he travels across the narrow sea to seek fortune and adventure. Discovering relics of ages that have long past.
(Ignore the first synopsis it was actual dog crap, I’d also changed my mind about certain aspects of the story when during the first chapter but forgot to change it)
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I do not own a song of ice and fire or any respective works.
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I thought it was a great story, it has a lot of potential and I see a promising future for Jon, it would be cool if he imitated Daemon and became the King of Steps. The biggest flaw in this story is the slow updates, sometimes the author doesn't post anything for a month and when he does post it's just one chapter and I don't know the others, but I keep wanting more! Highly frustrating!
The story easily catches you and the odd surprising event I highly recommend it if you want to see a jon with a harem and nothing passive Points to highlight is the story since it gives a great point of view in large part.
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Well, so far it is a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So this is my new fic, I think it’s a lot better in quality as I’ve learnt from the mistakes of my first fic. These chapters will be 6,000+ words each some probably being more. As of chapter 6 there are 45,000 words