摘要
They say luck is an uncontrollable force and karma is nothing but a cycle of cause-and-effect that depends on one's deeds. But what if luck somehow really could be manipulated while the way karma worked could be changed?
With the appearance of the Realm Games where every life became worthless and Artifacts that granted various powers, humankind was pushed to the ultimate path of evolution for one last time!
Raven, a simple young man, was also forced to walk on such a path, which with his cursed bad luck became even more difficult than for others!
However, what he did not know at that time was that it was not only humanity that was coerced with such a cruel fate but every living being in the far cosmos too!
Come and follow Raven on his journey and witness how he struggles his way through hardships and how he shifts his seemingly already decided fate that the Gods have destined him to walk from the very start!
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Disclaimer: This is not the same Earth as the one we are living on so do not use common sense unless you can breathe fire out from your nostrils!
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Notice: The cover does not belong to me.
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Shameless Author review! ;] Here is what you can expect from this book: 1. This is not a cultivation world but Earth in the future with apocalypse elements (Not right from the start but from the 2. volume), video game elements, and fantasy elements filled with action, adventure, myths, beasts, creatures and a bit of romance. 2. The MC is average but perceptive and a fast learner. He is not menacing nor a loser, but as the story goes on he will slowly learn how to become an antihero. Also, the MC is not a genius, so don't except him know everything! That's where other characters come in! 3. This story's first volume is just an appetizer, like a tutorial that shows our MC and the world how things work before throwing them right into the middle of the chaos, which starts at volume 2! 4. (Con) At the start the pace may seem fast, not insanely fast, but from chap 40 it slows down, but not too slow. Though, even like that until chap 40, I am sure you will enjoy it just as much as after it! :] 5. English is not my first language but I always try to improve so if you see mistakes make sure and feel free to point it out so I can correct them. (Without any toxicity of course.) 6. Update is around 1 chap a day, but if I see you kind readers like the story, (Ps or Summoning Pens) I will upload more, around 1-3 chaps, depending on how much support I get and how much time I have on my hands. 7. If you are curious about whether this is a harem or not, yes, there will numerous waifus, three to be specific. As for if he ends up with all of them? It will depend on the majority of you. (Though, don't expect 5+ girls drooling after MC, this is not that type of story.) 8. I am sure if you give a story a try you won't be disappointed! 9.Love you all, peace out!
UNDERATED- Overall rating 4.8/5 (I'm lenient when I review) SHORT CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 118 chapters As of the time I'm writing this, it's been 4 months. The amount of recognition this work is getting is pitifully low for what it deserves. It's a solid read for webnovel standards. The story develops quite nicely and besides the beginning which is a little slow, the pacing is good. There are many interesting ideas in the novel and the author does well to execute them. Many novels on here have interesting ideas, but the execution tends to fail. Here, it's quite clear and well explained. I'm not really sure why this novel isn't popular. Perhaps its because some people think its similar to Supremacy Games? (I haven't read that so I can't comment) Maybe it's the little slow start? The other point I could think of would be characters. Personally, I am pleased with the MC of this story. Kind, Silly, Misfortunate, kind of a gag character because of his gambling addiction, Naïve (which he grows out of), perhaps these traits shove away people expecting a ruthless, cold, selfish, anti-hero-like character, pragmatic character, survival of the fittest because the story is a survival game which people expect. It's a shame. It's refreshing to have a more morally good character in such a story. The Mc is very close to his family and has shared his secrets with them (Father and little Sister), which I suppose some people don't like because it's 'Stupid'. Yes yes indeed but not every mc can hold such burdens or secrets within their heart. The MC here actually feels much more human. I've also noticed that some people don't like the Little Sister, but personally I quite like her. Brocon aside, having seen many characters like her in other works, she is much much more on the likable side. She can be seen as annoying, clingy, but readers fail to see that its a very close brotherly and sister relationship. She is executed well. I hope people are more willing to give this novel a shot. It really deserves better. Shipping wise, it is intended to be 3 potential love interests. 118 chapters in, there's only been 1 that has been having the screen time. The other 2 are up in the air in regards to if they have appeared or not. I am looking forward to it. Hopefully I get some romantic drama with 1 heroine winning at the end.
This is a great story and I would think I have a great judge of story's. This story has a great storyline and it really pulls you in. Out of everything I think the story development is a little quick and kind of unnatural based in the circumstances that the characters have been through but other then that I think that this story has the ability to be one of the top story's on this app. Continue doing great author and you will have my support all the way to the end.
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Quite a good book with an interesting Mc, Fml, and other characters. The writing quality while not perfect is better than the majority on this sight, but perhaps this is just my opinion. Story development definitely not fast but interesting as I can see a great picture growing in the background. Stability should be more than now, but we can only hope the author will increase updates. All in all, I recommend everyone to at least try it as I don't feel it is a waste of time at all.
The story started pretty mysterious making me curious what will happen then I was dropped with a huge bomb of more confusion which I can't wait to see where will lead. So far, while being some mistakes here and there, I pretty much like it so I recommend everyone to give at least at try. You won't regret it.
Quite an interesting concept, definitely new to all the systems, cultivations, and other type of novels in this platform. Let's see how this will work out.
Of you want something new, something refreshing and interesting this is the best one you can find. Of course, there are mistakes here and there but I find this novel pretty intriguing!👀
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As a previous reader of Author's previous work, Cultivation Through Artifacts, I must say his writing became better which can be noticed the very start! Keep up the good work!
Wow what an amazing novel as expected from the author, loved the writing style and progression of the storyline, amazingly written mc too, rating this a well deserved 5 stars😊😊
From what I’ve read so far it’s a astonishingly good book that has been able to keep me interested from the first sentence to the last and I hope that it will continue to be as great as it has been so far!