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摘要
A guy gets reincarnated into Lookism as Daniel Park, come and read how he will throw hands with anyone cause he isn't the pussy the protagonist was.
An Au Lookism fanfiction, so some minor things might be different but the essence is that. the protagonist will change the plot for sure so you can even suggest something.
Don't expect the Mc to be always serious! he wants to enjoy his life.
tags:
No: Smut, yuri, yaoi, weak mc, simp, system.
Yes: Action, fast growth to overpowered, romance? Yes but realistic!
Good read.
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The only thing that is wrong with this fanfic is that sometimes there's Incorrect with the words and Grammer. Sometimes there's uncaptitalized "I"s, wrong spelling but other than that it's true to it's synopsis, This ain't no coward Daniel but someone whose stronged will. Though it needs work at it's prolonged but other than that it's a solid 8/10 in terms of Lookism FF.
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Good start and this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to more updates constantly the mc is great strong character and is not intimidated.
The fanfic is very good, you should read it, the character design, everything, the update is very good, it is published almost daily, so it is perfect, read it, it is very good.
Gostei bastante, as ações não são muito demoradas mas sinto que está indo um pouco rápido demais, eu apreciaria se o autor pudesse explicar um pouco mais dos personagens que ele cita ou estão juntos do mc, já que existem algumas pessoas assim como eu que não assistiram o anime e nem leram a obra, no momento acho que a escrita está muito boa e gostei bastante da personalidade do mc, ele não é muito (Durão) demais nem um mc (Beta) e bem razoável, seria interessante inserir um romance talvez não agora mas seria bom, nota 10/10 no momento.
it s a nice story but its not popler so pls read it and give it a chans (i know my gramer is horbole) well i dont think anybudy well see these review
This fanfiction takes a fresh twist on the "Lookism" universe by dropping a hilarious and confident guy into the role of Daniel Park. Unlike the original protagonist, this version isn’t afraid to throw hands and take charge. The humor throughout makes for a fun read, and it’s clear that the MC is here to enjoy life while shaking things up. The romantic subplot with Mary adds a sweet layer to the story. Their chemistry is playful and relatable, making you root for them even as chaos unfolds. I can’t wait to see how he navigates the challenges and changes the plot while keeping that lighthearted spirit. Overall, it's a great blend of action and comedy that keeps you hooked ps : my first language is not english so i had help from ai but all that is real its great fan fic and i am hooked can't wait for more
it good till now. but want more of big Danny interaction. just end the lookism fanfic curse
another lookism fanfic to fill the void in my chest (make him interact with other lookism verse manhwa like viral hit and manager kim please)
I am saying this from my own opinion. I will not disagree with my opinion nor I will reject anyone else's. 1. I think you are moving too fast in the story. You are leaving out how MC was in previous life, how he get his mentally and all. You are skipping the part where it will make him seem intelligent like choosing the peaks and such. Right now he seems like a single-minded per with only the plan to take advantage of the plot. You should improve that. 2. You are not properly explaining his peaks. How they work or their limitations. Work on that, don't make him too strong at the start. He has insane potential, yes, but you don't expect him to become strong just by training do you? 3. You should write about his day-to-day life. It makes us feel and understand more about MC. Simple things like, locking his door, giving a cat food or giving beggers some money and such. 4. Lastly, as there is going to be only one love interest, don't mention much about other girls. Of course, aside from the plot. If you mention more girls then it will give us expectation. That's all I have to say. Thanks for your fanfic. It's good overall. Note: Don't forget Lookisim is not just a single manhwa. It has many more too.
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Great one liking it till now pls make More chapters. currently little Daniel personality is like
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