/ Anime & Comics / Loner in Danmachi
摘要
What happens when a loner's soul merges with the soul of an orphan from Orario?
Will the new abomination born from these two souls be able to see the bright side of the world and become a bright sun illuminating the world, or will it stay as an abomination?
Read and see the story of Wayne, an orphan from Daedalus Street and a loner from another world.
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This is a Danmachi Fanfic, and there will be no brainless romance in this story. However, there will be R-18 chapters with related female leads.
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For those who are searching for a protagonist that is perfect from the start, please don't read this book and insult me. This novel is, of course, a wish fulfillment, but it is a wish fulfillment of mine. Keep that in mind.
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You can reach my pat reon, if you want to read chapters ahead and support me.
There are 15 chapters ahead currently.
Here is the link...
patreon.com/user?u=84066306
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4.07
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Languagewise its rather well written. Some slight errors with the grammar or vocabulary in some parts. For the character design and world development thats the bad parts. The story description is rather faulty definitionwise since he is not really a transmigrator or reincarnator. its a fused soul between a native and the said loner. Hoped for a better MC with thr highIQ tag and the villain tag but the MC is a rather impulsive idiot at least till chapter 18 which is the newest. Also the MC is a literal slave to a ROB and the system even if he was forced into it plotwise its still a slave MC with a faulty system since the description doesnt fit with his impulsive and forced behavior in some parts.(MC behaves like a dumb shounen MC mostly)(example is a quest to reach floor 4 in the dungeon. It never said first dive or on the first day. there was also no time limit and he still forces himself there for little reason first try and nearly died for it and monologued some shounenBS while at it) update stability seems quite good with one short-medium chapter a day.
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The story goes well. I like the personality of the main character. He joins Hestia as a family.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
As long this is not faithful to the canon plot then it will be good. I hope for a twist that takes the story on another path. Istg too many danmachi fanfics are just self inserts doing the exact same thing Bell did so its basically the same story but with a different character and dialouge. I know this will be different tho Im sure lol
Bro read if you want I’m saying that it isn’t for me. This story is very bad in my opinion. The writing quality is definitely amateur and the content is meh. The mc is meant to be anti social but isn’t. There is a gross amount descriptive writing for everything that makes it seem very repetitive like a circle. The dialogue is so dull, just unintelligent, and unnecessary. It’s readable but it’s a brainless read. Shut down your brain before reading if you want the best experience.
It’s alright. He is suppose to be a loner but his social skills are high even if he acts shy. There are a couple troupes I really dislike. Two of them being how the system and his life operates. The fight scenes are alright. Just average at best. This review is after reading 30 chapters
Raad like, the first 6 paragraphs he has family and friends, joins Hestia. 110% a loner, totally...
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Well... Seems good.... But I'm worried about the Villian tag... I mean Villian MC+Hestia=Impossible, Hestia is not a goddess who would tolerate a villain as a family. Author, pls do explain
Muy bueno el capítulo sigue así que no te afecte la opinión de los demás mientras más vas a andando mejor te vuelves además casi no hay historia de danmachi ya que la mayoría la dejan abandonada a mitad de la historia entonces sigue así compañero 😃😂😃👍👍👍👍👍 me encanta la historia
The idea of the protagonist selling his soul through the system is irritating if the missions force him to do something against his will, but fortunately this has not happened so far. I like to think that the God who offered the system is a way for the author to guide the story and protagonist as he wants and have a justification for this in the form of missions. Possessive Hestia is annoying because it's harem, but Bell being a woman seems quite attractive, a cute ans innocent bunny. Google Translate.
Amazing danmachi fanfiction in my opinion. It is really nice to see how Wayne gets stronger and how his system is making progress
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la historia esta llendo bastante bien , el protagonista es agradable , la construcción del mundo es muy poco pero es entendible ya que hace poco empieza , recomiendo que no sea solo en orarion la Historia y tambien que si haces cambio en la historia avisa antes de hacerlos o que lo digas , asi no habrá gente que se enoje , es titulo tiene sentido y anque el mc es un solitario no significa que no sea sociable , tímido o manso es solo su personalidad pero igual quiere a las personas que se le acercan y parecen interesados en tener una amistad con el , el título del solitario se refiere a que es un solitario en la mazmorra ........ la historia va bien solo le faltan un par de cosas pero como recién comienza no voy a hablar , ¿ es recomendable para leer ? ...... sisi es entretenido , fácil de leer , buena escritura , buen comienzo , mc agradable , interesante , y mas .... por ahora un 8,50 o 9 pero como recién empieza hay que esperar aun
A lot of your books are the same way makes it really hard to read and it’s super irritating to get to any good parts within. They’re not that good like yeah you explain it later but it’s still irritating that I have to read it in the first place like this the tags you use the name of the title do not match your characteruntil way later down in the storyline
maybe I will write a proper review later but dude i couldn't find your pat reon its like no where help help help help help help help help
All I'd like to know is why the Title have "Loner" in it when there's a "Harem" tag, A "Loner" is alone, "Harem" is with "Multiple" people. All I'm saying is that the Title makes no sense, other than that the story is oryt.