摘要
Kane has lived in a village near the border with his mother. When he was 6, due to the attack of the Leronia Empire on his village, he lost his mother. As an orphan, he was trained by the army of the Kingdom of Forsteck to be a man who would perform tasks impossible for ordinary soldiers.
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I’ll say this is a rough diamond waiting to be properly polished. The first few chapters needs work, but it’s a story with a lovely plot. I hope to see the author grow.
The novel's grammar is good. A very nice and intriguing starting I must say. Not many chapters but so far it has been a fun read.Good Job Author.