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章節 29: Not a chapter

Hello dear readers, 

It has been almost a year since the second arc of Live a life started, and now I finally have done it! It was a journey but here we are. Thank you all for the support! Especially those who stuck around for like 11 months waiting for me to update this! Y'all are kings (and queens)!

With the second arc completed, theres obvious things that I want your guys input on like:

-How's the action? Good? Make sense? Seems kinda realistic?

-MC smart enough yet still human enough to make mistakes?

-System cool?

General shit like that is what I want y'alls input on. I know the second arcs yapping to actual shit ratio was a bit off so please be honest with your feedback.

The more interesting feedback I want y'alls is,

August's backstory and cause of death.

I'm a lil stumped on how I want his backstory to go, I want it to be deep enough that it has a lasting impact on his character but I also wanna add in Serria into the shit cause spoiler alert: She'll be meeting August soon.

I could be thinking about this fanfic a lil to hard cause well, it's a fanfic, but I do want to make a actual good story for people to enjoy and have it have characters that people can feel for and like. (I'm yapping now aren't I)

Anyways, what abilties y'all want to see for Augusts skills? With another hunt cleared he's getting some new shit so now is your chance for YOUR favorite ability to be picked by me, if it's reasonable enough. 

Which leads me to the final point, whats the next world to visit? I know some of y'all want to go to anime worlds while some want some random shit I pull out of my ass, so please feel free to leave suggestions! I'm practically begging y'all to leave suggestions!

Thank you all again for supporting live a life, couldn't have made it this far without your guys support and power stones! I'll continue to write out this fanfic til it stops making sense!

Signed,

Machina


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