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摘要
OC from our world Transmigrated to DxD world as high class devil infant 5 years before Rias was born. He also have made wishes to god before transmigrated.
This is story about peerage and rating games.
Anti-hero MC.
No system, no crossover, no instant OP without training.
PS:I do not own DxD,only OC
PS 2: story had been rewrited.
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It does has potential, only the 1st chapter to this date but it's quite good. Looking forward for the development of this story
Bruh what do you mean no broken wishes asked most of his wishes are broken already, excluding the mutated peices, but thats already pretty powerful too.
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what is the problem with making wishes op? DXD is a dangerous world where they can hurt your loved ones, if it were up to me I would ask to be a god or have the potential to be. People are stupid if they think nothing bad will happen for making unimportant wishes.
The story is just meh. First off this is a god wish cliche fic. The problem is that the wishes were not very op well it had potential but the mc doesn’t use the wishes to their full capacity. Another thing is the mc wished for unlimited potential but only reached highclass strength after 11 years of hard constant training. While that is decent other characters in the same fic reach it in significantly less time. He also has certain categories that he is horrible at. The excuse being he isn’t talented but by having unlimited potential talent is pointless cause he has not restrictions in any category. He even gives up a training path to train something else, this makes the unlimited potential basicly trash. He grows like any other side character would. Even though the wishes should have given him mc levels of growth. The side characters are very mid, they seem like an npc tbh. The progression of the novel is very inconsistent. Both is strength wise and plot wise. The writing quality is decent so there’s that. There are a lot of sections in thjs fic that are unnecessary or just plain stupid.
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I think current story is pretty fast. but acceptable, if it is slow down after collecting peerage and start fighting in rating game. ###########################################################@####3#####################################33###########$##$$$$$###########################$$$$#################################
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In my opinion, he asked too much from ROB. jasdhuwedhaduladhwauhfffffffffffffffffffffffffgdhausdhwiudhajdhwu udhiudjudhdaliuhfuhladhwliuadhlkajsduhw
A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast. A wish-fulfilling story. The story moves very fast.