摘要
MC Luo Fie reborn as Borsalino(Kizaru).
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Crossing in the World of One Piece and founding himself that he has become one of Admiral of Navy Borsalino aka. Light Human.
He got Light Light Devil Fruit.
With the fastest speed see how he grow and become strong and stir up the sea and this whole world and incited the interest of World Government and Nobles.
To make it more interesting he found cultivating breathing methods have an amazing effect in this world.
This is not a fantasy but a real world.
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"Gol D Roger, your next move, will set off a chaotic era, causing people to suffer and increasing criminals. Are you sure to do this?
"Byrrndi World, your crime, no need for any forgiveness and tolerance, death is your only end!"
"Five Elder Stars, you have been doing wrong for hundreds of years, contrary to justice, please roll out Mary Geoise and accept your punishment!"
In the battlefield where artillery and blood are intertwined, only the navy is justice!
And he, code-named Kizaru, is the most powerful in the history of the Navy!
All violations of justice will be his enemies!
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Since you have posted this novel recently , i will give you 5 star. Starting is good I wish you can continue this novel instead of Dropping it.
Writing Quality OK 5/5 Update ( you said depend on your mood ) 3/5 Story ( Not Much Progressed ) 4/5 Character ( Not many introduced yet ) 4/5 World Bck. ( Not much seen yet ) 4/5 Final >>> Tada .. . da. .. . < 4.0 > (*_*) ( ^_^ ) ( 0_0 )
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I really love one pice novels and that's why I will give you 5 stars. Hope you can contini writing and don't drop................................
I like it. Bottem is to get to that 140carchacter min Yeet you can come to the house to get my car fixed and I will be there at school and I have a lot going on and I'm not sure how to get to the airport and thenyou can
Did you just copy-paste the translation of 海贼之海军黄猿 CN fanfic? Your summary reads like a mix between this one and One Piece – Thundergod Marine, another translated CN fanfic. I hope you plan to write with your own ideas too without just copying a CN fanfic.
As an author, I will rate my work at 5 Star. But story whether it is worth it or not, only after reading people may know. I am writing just for fun. No Money No Business. So you should not expect best from me. Just think of this novel as a time pass. If you like to Bookmark it if you don't then write a bad comment and Leave. It doesn't matter much. If you are interested in this story you can wait patiently. Updates may be a little slow. ---------- If anyone wishes to take this concept or this novel itself or just copying it and then starting anew, then you are welcome. I would also love to read similar novels. Just don't go too much into harem or making it Harem Focus Novel. --------- And yes one last thing if any of you know few One Piece Good Fan-Fic pls. recommend me I would like to read. ----- In the end, English is not my main language.