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Aonaran Aureolus Savellano is the hidden princess of the kingdom Sezchin. She is living her life with a bliss. With her spoiled brat attitude, a lot of people hate her but no one dares to mess up with her. Not until that guy came back, her childhood sweetheart. Destroyed all her plans and messed up with her.
At the same time, her fiance, a prince from the kingdom of Salturesa also arrive on their country, pretending as one of her bodyguards.
Problems after problems, Aonaran's has been messed up and totally not peaceful anymore.
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Love the plot this is great work keep it up Author, do your best, Love these chapters a lot, good job Author, 💯💯keep it up Author loved your work, 💯✔️
The writing quality is overall fine. There are mistakes with word choice (for example the wrong tense of word is used). But that's the only real repetitive error. The pacing is good, and other elements of the story are fine.
This novel is interesting. It portrays how royals and nobles in their everyday lives and the personalities of each characters are well-developed in my opinion. There are some grammatical errors along the way but it can be fixed just keep on writing and practice as well. ^_^ Keep going! ^_^
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This book is awesome. It shows us the life of royalty. huh, after reading this book, I had decided to be a commoner. ugh, there are too many problems in becoming rich. lol
The story is great! Keep writing author! I hope that Aonaran can find happiness despite the problems she'll face! I like her attitude specially that she's doing things for a reason
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The story has potential. It seems like you plan out the plot ahead since the pacing is going well. I like how we as readers get an overview of what the MC’s personality is just from reading the first few lines. There were some small grammar mistakes but worry not, as it did not affect my reading experience at all. A little bit of polishing here and there would definitely helps your novel shine even more. Keep on writing :).
Keep up the good work, author! More Aonaran and Domenic bardagulan! I like how Aona always say that she should get back at Dome but always end up being submissive!
very intresting and captivating story i fell in love with it at first read , good and intresting story plot, more knowledge and ideas to the author