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(if you search for story OP MC from the start this is not the one! smart mc? not either.) [Genre: Action, Comedy, Romance, Mysterious Background, Hard Working MC, Harem??, Weak to Strong.]
a man working in a black company finally quit the job
after almost 7 years he continued to work from morning until late at night to live and save in order to be able to go to Japan to fulfill his wishes when he entered high school.
he really wanted to visit a place where 2D heaven was.
but, when he will go home and make plans to prepare for his vacation to Japan, the Legendary Truck Hit the man.
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Sorry for being too honest here , overall its so bad and so cringeworthy dialog lol Grammar? Lol Please proof read before u publish ............................................
I see this story that has potential that hasn't shown all of its cards yet. However the interaction of MC and co can be summed up as sweet and nice to one another. Kinda bugs me if the character trys a sudden get em all kind of personality after his few day in this world so far.
Its bad. Its just a typical harem novel with bad grammar and cliches.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Average, unremarkable, generic.😐 I don't like it. I don't hate it. I would like it if it wasn't harem or sharingan, but it is your story.....
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The book was lol in some places but it need to be better I don’t think I will continue reading it is kind of boring I think u need to work harder on your story other then that it was ok don’t stop writing u have a good thing going I think with more time u will get better and better
Hey bro, just read this novel !!!!! This novel have good a potential, i like this story and background story !!! Just i think this mc will build a harem !!!! Still waiting the next chapter, and please dont dropped this novel
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this novel have potential . i hope it keeps updating😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍......................................................................
Me gusta la novela espero no la dejes.....................................................................................................................
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Thank you for the story I really enjoy reading your novel hope you will write again and please don't dropped the story I really love your story
This book is good so far I think you work on making the next chapter better the better the characters the the story so thanks for writing this book if u make some more I will try to read them write back to tell me if u do
Great all around. Not many problems apart from a mix up on Pov every now and then but even so doesn't make it unreadable. Very enjoyable. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👍☝☝☝☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love my novel very much so i shamelessly ratings the novel with full Mark! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~