摘要
After a devastating earthquake, a seasoned professional boxer finds himself transported to an unfamiliar realm. In this strange world, he awakens as a lethargic individual who has never engaged in physical fitness or even walked properly. A pivotal turning point occurs when he ventures into a perilous dungeon and encounters a life-altering moment when he trades places with the indolent man. This transformation grants him two extraordinary abilities: the Super Body System and the power of Obito Uchiha. Fusing these newfound powers, he embarks on a journey of self-discovery and empowerment, gradually ascending to become the world's most formidable force...
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My assumptions about extremely bad fanfiction on English and Asian platforms are becoming a reality. Such disgusting stories featuring characters from different worlds. You can write a story without these "Game Systems". Well, or an author is Asian who has a very poor understanding of Western fantasy. And even more so, they ruined Obito Uchiha. A classic for such works.
This one is a bit... flat. The characters almost speak with one 'voice' and its easy for my mind to drift due to the monotony. The mythical 'rewrite' could fix it, it has decent bones, but that hardly ever happens and doesn't help what we have now. If I manage to stick with it, I might change this review
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It irritates me that I describe a dialogue, rather than making abut,I like everything else. MC is not straight-laced, but he is not cruel, and he does good if a problem appears in front of him.
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I like the story at the start but the way the paragraphs change or the lack of dialogue make the story lack something that doesn't make me like the characters are alive
Finally I found a story where the main character has the power of Kamui, please don't drop this story, because I like this. well, keep on updating, don't stop writing this story. update a lot and be consistent [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]