/ Fantasy / Leveling up as a Battle Mage
摘要
Finrod was just a young elf when the suns of Melos darkened and an evil entity appeared, bestowing a system upon its inhabitants.
With it came hordes of creatures that were out for blood. It was either fight and level up or die, and Finrod is far from giving up.
Equipping the Battle Mage class, he fights through hordes of gnarly creatures, hoping to survive the new apocalyptic landscape.
[WSA 2024 Entry]
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First of all, the premise is very original and the main character is pretty alright. The world building is staggering for a novel with such a clickbaity and dull title, an apocalypse that happens in a magic world governed by a peaceful goddess of life and with nature-loving elves being forced to fight and kill is pretty cool and breaks the norm of the usual apocalypse. The progression is fine, typical in the genre, but the main character has a natural edge as he was prviously gifted with mana from the beginning. He just began to learn how to use his gift offensively, hence battle mage. So far there's a lot that needs to be developed yet, the grammar and wording can come out as weird at times. I would recomend the author using grammarly + quillbot to edit.
A story that thrusts you straight into the action and is as epic as they come. MC is a survivor, and he isn't pathetic in the slightest. I'd definitely recommend you to give it a try.
I just started reading this novel and wow! It catches your attention starting from chapter 1!! As a new Author, I seriously seriously adore your work
Who wouldn't wanna write the first review for any book? P.S Mage's recommendation, I'll try it out 🌚