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losing your memory and six years later you find your love who is connected to your past.. Jimmie found his first and only love after six years of separation. they undergoes many challenges, betrayal by family and friends. The it hearts hardens and turns vengeful..they plan to clean the world from every evil people...
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The book sure is interesting to read.The suspense employed makes the reader anticipate the next chapters quite eagerly and the flow is well developed
Cant get enough of reading the book,,the themes and its characterization the flow of ideas ,,the humor the language everything just excellent
THE BOOK IS AMAZING I Really LOVE IT IT THE BEST I HAVE READ SO FAR. The flow is wonderful i rate it five stars. I can urge the movie lovers to read this master piece
I rate it five stars, the story is mesmerizing, I really like it, it's captivating , a wonderful piece that I would urge everyone to read. The creativity is on top, and character development is the best, the flow is addictive.
The best and most intriguing story I have ever read. A twist of romance and action....talk of fast and furious reloaded 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
An amazing and mesmerising story which leaves you hanging for more. Great story writer.
It's quite interesting, but there are some things you should take note of. Firstly, try to express your characters properly. Give them more emotion's This enables a reader to connect with them better. Secondly, there are a few mistakes that can make a reader confused. Also, you should write a synopsis for the story. Most webnovel readers judge a story by reading the synopsis. It is very crucial. Overall, it has a good 👍
How wonderful.its getting interesting. I want to see how the story unfold. The plot twist is wow.character development is on top.Amaxing
The book is wow, I like the book flow of ideas and the suspense gives the urge to read more and more,,the characterization done so well,middle level language well understood
I'm giving this five stars The suspense is amazing and the choice of words makes me smile
I love the story ..... Its so interesting more so how pretty is not remembering Jimmy looking forward to see if they are going to defeat the Gerald's men.love how the story is going so far Love it
The book is a superb for a beginner with an interest in writing, i love it,the flow of ideas ,the language perfect👍 The picture and the styles showed clearly,,need more of this to read
It's interesting I like it. Looking forward to how the story will flow.. it isn't bad .... I can not wait for more... Well done patros. Am your fan
揭示劇透 Not a bad one for a starting book... .............the story is above average looking forward to see what the author has... update more chapters per day.
Mesmerized by this piece of joy.I always prefer simple words instead of jargon whereby I have to refer to a dictionary every now and then,this is not the case,waiting for the next.