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摘要
Lei Jin is a young cultivator with an excellent growth rate. He loves life and knows how important it is to protect it. Even at a heavy cost. Follow Lei Jin's story as he grows into a great man. (Martial Peak Alternate Universe) Note: If you haven't read the original series yet there will be many confusing things.
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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the story and world bulding is good and the effort put by the author is good too but the life of mc feels like a puppet who couldnt control his own life and is being controlled by the sects elder i hope author and improve this feeling
Look, I couldn't really tell you how good the novel is because I didn't read much, but the dialogues make me put it down, they feel surreal and super flat, plus the conversations are missing information, like: Lei Jin felt a presence in that place. That kind of things.
you read fanfic becauss you want to see your favorite canon characters in action or self insert yourself into the story loved by your favorite characters? jokes on you, thia fic is all about OC characters interacting and in relationship with OC characters while all your favorite characters of this fandom and girls is sidelined into mere supporting or figuran. enjoy
Is MC reincarnated, transmigrated or oc? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Will any of the girls from the original story be part of the mc harem im thinking about 50 wifes and 100 the limit