/ Anime & Comics / Legendary travelling ninja (DROPPED)
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please review i am a new shameless writter
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shameless autor rate 5 star .... give a review ....hehehe ..................................................................................
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just because I want to bitch~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The grammar is shit, i have to read every sentence twice just so i can understand, we basically don't know who was the mc before he got isekai'd, also the author is just straight up insulting people that give suggestions in the paragraphs.