摘要
A former delinquent, Cloud Alistair found himself in a chain of unfortunate events.
First, he got kicked out of college due to a false accusation and then chased down by a group of thugs.
Just when he thought he was safe, he suddenly got sucked through a portal and stuck inside the void where there is nothing to see but land stretching as far as the eye can see and the endless ocean of stars up above.
Will he be able to escape and find his way back home? Or will he perish in this godforsaken land?
*Inspired by reading savage divinity so no OP MC. Also please forgive me if my English is not good. Not my native language. This is my first story and I welcome constructive criticism. The story will also be posted in Royal road.
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Read up to the 31st chapter so far but this novel has been very enjoyable. Might write another review if things change. The characters are unique enough to not feel bland or cookie cutter. There are elements to the story that remind me of a good dungeons and dragons story which is welcome as it is interesting however sometimes it makes it a bit too easy for me to predict things. The writing itself is consistent enough for me to not be jarred out of my immersion in the story due to mistakes in spelling or grammar. All in all was an enjoyable read I look forward to more chapters by this author.
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Shameless review of Author as custom here in Webnovel. This is my first dive into the world of writing. I am a fan of adventure and fantasy. I was inspired to write after reading tons of story that fills my imagination with wonder. I hope my story will also inspire someone to write their own in the future.
Ok it really doesn't look too good when there's so many mistakes in the summary. He found or he finds himself in a situation ..., then was chased or and then was chased better use "was" instead of "got" sucked so all in all I was really not impressed by the summary, all these mistakes are something that can be easily fixed by using grammarly or other correction apps Author-san, if you read this, I'll give your novel a try but I recommend using grammar correction or getting an editor