Legend of the END

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ANURAG_SAHARAN

As the shameless Author I give 5 star ✨ review . Greetings to the reader who have time to read my novel . This is my first novel and English is not my first language . There will some mistake but I hope to improve them along the story . I appreciate your honest review . Please give it read

Bhai macha Diya yr tune toh......Anurag Saharan:THE SILENT KILLER🔥🔥 Ho jaaega,publish hoegi bro,bs or daalte ja asi novels,dekhlenna koi na koi ek toh bahut jaada famous hogi.....

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Brian_Hanes_117

This is a fun story, the world background is there, and the updates are consistent. The writing could be a bit more polished and a few things are oddly phrased due to translation but overall it is a fun story for someone interested in a more simplistic battle-based tale. The author has his own ranking system as well. Description is interesting at times though I would appreciate if the chapters were long and there was more content in them. One thing that especially could use is a bit more explanation about the setting, environment, and what it looks like. The world background is there when it comes to describing the circumstances but it doesn't make me feel like I'm in the world. I want to know what foods they eat, what their cultures are, what it is like going for a walk outside as the MC, etc. Remember you are not just telling a story but you are also making a world as if you are experiencing it. Everything that would happen in such a story like this should be laid out in the novel. Wishing you the best on your journey writer, cheers.

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AYESHA_FAHIM

While being securely rooted in reality, Herat twitches. That is what I noticed immediately throughout the story. This interesting book examines the idea of reincarnation and the perils of a magical universe. The author does a fantastic job of retaining the reader's interest despite the story's plenty of action and adventure. A system that pays players for completing quests is an intriguing idea. In conclusion, this book has a lot of potential and is absolutely worth reading!

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Silvers_7958

i hope you will work on world building and will introduce more fun character's in the story keep doing hardwork 👍

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BS_Entertainment

I love the system and the ability to create new bloodlines. The story seems interesting so far with loads of room to explore and expand. Grammatically, the writing can sometimes let you down, but compared to a lot of novels on here it's not really a problem!

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Rainandstorm

I like your book so much author, the synopsis caught my attention.. I really do love it, please do keep on updating

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HouseOfLee

Great quality writing and a good story, definitely recommend this novel to those looking for a good story!

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Vigilant_Dreamer

Nice plot, the story of the protagonist becoming the end, very interesting plot, I will be waiting for more chapters to be released in the future.

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prajnya_shriyan

Very interesting plot. Chapters are short but it makes sense. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work and keep updating!!!!

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Abluegiant

Reincarnation is a sympathetic soul is a soul that has gone through tremendous pain If it is looking for a cunning and cold hero then this book is your good How old saying goes Don't judge my path if you haven't walked my journey So I recommend this book

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SupremeArchmage

"Legend of the END" is an intriguing novel that explores the concept of reincarnation and the dangers of a magical world. The story follows Mors Tenebris, a man who is reborn into a new world and gains knowledge and power through a unique system. The story is full of adventure and action, and the author does an excellent job of keeping the reader engaged. The characters are well-developed, and the concept of a system that rewards players for completing quests is fascinating. Overall, this novel has great potential and is definitely worth checking out!

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Marckaroni

Interesting premise with a good synopsis. The grammar is consistent and the writing quality great. I think there could still be a bit more world background but there are currently only 19 chapters so its fine. I will be looking forward to new chapters. Good job :)

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vinod_Saharan

मोर्स टेनेब्रिस वह शांत, जोड़ तोड़ करने वाला, निर्दयी और उदासीन व्यक्ति है। जब तक उसका लक्ष्य पूरा नहीं हो जाता, तब तक वह किसी को मारने के लिए आंख नहीं झपकाता। वह कभी-कभी अच्छे या बुरे व्यक्ति के रूप में कार्य करता है यदि यह उसके जीवित रहने की क्षमता को प्रभावित नहीं करता है कहानी मोर्स पर केंद्रित है जो छिपे हुए स्थानों, ब्रह्मांड, विशाल तारों वाले आकाश में रोमांचित करती है, नए रहस्यों की खोज करती है जो विशाल ब्रह्मांड को पकड़ते हैं, दुनिया की क्रूरता और अंधेरे पक्ष को देखते हैं। और अंत में, पुनर्जन्म के अपने कारण को खोजना और सच्ची स्वतंत्रता का सही अर्थ खोजना। वह पाता है कि हर कोई किसी चीज से बंधा हुआ है जो सच्ची स्वतंत्रता नहीं देता है, क्या वह व्यक्ति सर्वशक्तिमान है जो सच्ची स्वतंत्रता है? एक किंवदंती बनना जिसे अंत के रूप में जाना जाता है …… लेजेंड ऑफ़ द END कहानी पढ़कर इसके बारे में पता करें, लेखक की कलम से अति सराहनीय प्रयास अपने बेटे का पहला उपन्यास पढ़कर समीक्षा अवश्य दें