Konoha: Reforge the glory of Uchiha!

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Omer_Alfarog_Hamza_6265

Hello author, is this story written or translated? I want to tell you that the sequence of events is very fast. Let me tell you, even if Hiruzen and his team return, Mito won't be able to lock them up like this. Please note the events and the reality of the world.

It’s kinda interesting, i got the idea to write this era for a long time, maybe i’ll start write again

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LOLI_DUTA

Lanjutkan........................................................................................................................................................................................

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1Volk_Winc_est4

Pretty good so far, the MC is clever, things aren't artificially lengthened just to slow down the pace. Two little shits were quickly eliminated by the MC, much to my delight. The translation is, how can I say, barely acceptable, and that's the big problem with this story. The big strength of this story, on the other hand, is that it begins at the end of the reign of the second Hokage, which is a really, really underused time period. In my opinion, it's a much more interesting period than the Canon, with great narrative potential if properly exploited (a bit like the Warring Kingdoms period, even if it's a little less rich). I really hope that the Senju clan won't follow the path they've taken historically, and the same goes for the Uzumaki clan. The Uchiha must reign over them, over the whole world truly, with goodness and honor, and safeguard their survival - they are, after all, brother clans of the same lineage.