/ Anime & Comics / Konoha's Life Mentor, Kyoichi
摘要
Kyōichi transmigrated to Konoha and became a temporary teacher at the ninja academy, fortunately, he awakened a mentor system. By teaching others, he can earn rewards. So, Kyōichi began his career as a "teacher" in the ninja world.
Shisui: "The teacher's unique Will of Fire has truly helped the Uchiha find their direction!"
Asuma: "The heart of our responsibility, akin to a precious jewel, lies in protecting the people. With the experienced ones leading those who come after, only in this way can Konoha truly become stronger."
Kakashi: "He is my life mentor, he changed Konoha!"
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Many years later, Kyōichi, as Hokage, wrote in his memoirs - I really just wanted to be a life mentor!
* AU
* Translated from Chinese fanfic
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This is a fantastic fanfiction. It has great time period. It has good characters. It has a good pace. It has somewhat good action. Andthe premise is great. Here is five stars to keep it going.
Very good story,. There are a few naming errors, but the remaining story so far is nice..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Surprisingly good, barely noticing any of the bad stuff that makes chinese novels annoying to read. Could be even better if there wasn't missplaced names, other than that it's great.
I would like it better if you actually put in the time and effort or had those helping you do a better job with the grammar and vocabulary, all freaking Asian novels sound like a five year old.
I have mixed filling about this fanfiction. The writing is good, the story development is also very decent. However, I don't really like the MC personality. He seems obsessed with Harashima's cells, a little bit arrogant, very sure and full of himself, not really my cup of tea... It's a shame because I really like the writing and the plot.
Pretty good, aside from a few translation errors around ch25, the story is pretty decent. Hope the author continues to translate the fic! 👍🏻
Very good author, refreshing this novel with respect to the others that follow a common point all. D S S S S S S S S S S S S S Ss S S S Ss S S A S A Ss A A Ss S S S
Uma história muito boa, recomendo a todos, basicamente um divisor de águas para leitores, será aqui que você descobrirá que estava lendo histórias podres e fracas! o autor está de parabéns
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Awesome story. But no new updates. Would love to know how the story will progress. If the author does see this, please update the story. It's has awesome story line would be a waste to drop it.
This is already close to being my favorite fanfiction so far. Unlike other stories (fanfictions), the MC isn't fixated on the timeline but he's aware of his impact as well as the politics that lurk beneath the surface. He can navigate the world by keeping the big picture in mind while also accomplishing his goal of being a teacher. The tone is mostly light-hearted but serious when it matters. Overall a great read except some minor errors in writing and that I'm waiting for updates.
Writing quality is ok...flow could have been betterMain problem is character of MC...i mean it is the same problem with all Chinese...after transmigration they starts to show off without considering long term incidence even if they were average in their previous life...it is their inferiority complex that ruin the novels...