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This story/book is NOT my work, it belong to Top Old Cow, the three first chapter were already traduced by Delta Translations
I will try to let it be free most of the time ( the other will be costing 1 or 2 power stone max)
P.S. : English is not my main language to it's bound to have some error of grammar, etc.
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SYNOPSIS
Marin found himself in the body of a young wandering knight who was driven out of the house. Forced into the 15th Century, he was armed with only a horse, a breastplate, and a lance.
He was soon caught up in the era of German mercenaries established by Maximilian I. And so he decided to become a mercenary. Relying on his internet, historical and game knowledge, he will establish his own mercenary force. Waging war with French knights and Swiss armies, even Emperors, Kings and Pope will beg for his help.
Marin will also send ships to "tail" the Da Gama fleet, going to India and beginning to participate in the maritime trade and colonial competition ...
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This is the first book of this webnovel the second one is called "The Rise of the European Emperor"
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I have been waiting years for this novel to translated thank you so much. i hope you dont drop it or i well be mad lol, so thank you again. Great story and it gas kingdom build sorta so far i totally recomend it.
one of my favorite novel and I am already reading the second book, don't expect magic or something like that, it is a pretty Historical novel.
I liked this book quite decently in the beginning but then I went to read the second book rise of the European emperor and the MC was just racist as hell. I have nothing against what he was doing during the time period as it was normal but author said they’ll send black people to japan to lower their IQ as black people are stupid. As a black persons it’s hard to support a book with blatant racism inside of it. Author just uses the word negro casually like its nothing. I don’t mind saying slaves but it seems like the author believes in eugenics and shows his bias in this book towards hating japan. Decent book but the racism ruined it for me.
Ok i don't even know were to start, the idea has some potential but you kinda ruined it with bad writhing , and an mc that is dumer than a rock .He was kill in a street fight and now he's rushing to war, were if you are lucky you might survive he uses almost no knowledge from the future , why is it so hard to have an mc with a brain.
The reason why the mc is dumb because the author is dumber than the mc. The grammar is the worst kinda ruined the entire thing and the mc has no common sense and the story doesn't make sense
Any book that takes advantage of white supremacy conquering, enslaving, colonising and murdering of Africans, I don’t like....Even if you meant well and u are just doing dis cuz u enjoying writing(I know, I’m a writer.!) I just can’t enjoy it, knowing that my people had gone thru centuries of suffering for it.........this is not a review of what the book is actually like, just my personal opinion it’s ur choice if u wanna read...I’m just saying I personally cannot enjoy a book like that simple✌🏾
the author of this book is a nationalist chinese and a racist, in the sequel he says that he will send black people to japan to drop the iq of the population like wtf is that, and for some reason he goes to china to bend the knee to the chinese emperor when it wasnt necessary and he wouldnt do it for the holy roman empire emperor and his justification my ego isnt hurt by that, also half the book is infodump on why china is better at everything, war, food, politics... and i mean everything, he also complains 150 times about how europeans are stinky dirty people trhought the book, it has a few good ideas but everything comes too easy and the hiring an depiction of historical is too unrealistic also the characters other than the mc are too stupid.
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Overall, a pretty good story so far, still needs to be updated, and the main protagonist is kind of a racist, but still a pretty good story.
This is unreadable. Desperately needs an editor. It is unfortunate too because i think it is a great novel. I mean, who doesnt want a rtw like novel in medieval Europe.
I really like a lot of the elements of this series but the MC's blatant racism and stupid ideas kills most of my enthusiasm for it. He has an Idea of giving black slaves to the Japanese Emperor to "Make their descendants dumber" which is nonsensical. He's always saying stuff like how he doesn't want black people in his kingdom because of how they "complain about their plave in society in America" but he's okay with Mongolians, Tibetans and Ukrainians who when put in similar situations as African americans would react Exactly the same way. Also his 'genius plan' to feed noblewomen Icecream to stop them from getting pregnant even though it's proven by studies that having milk based products IMPROVES pregnancy chances and the impact of cold foods is negligible. It's like the MC keeps picking up bigger and bigger idiot balls the more the story goes on. Which is a shame.
if this guy got a proofreader/editor this story would be so much better, but as it stands, I refuse to force myself to decipher hieroglyphs for this level of story
The translation is terrible and to continue reading we need to search for a mtl BUT the novel is a really really good kingdom building e definitly worth read
It was a good book tell he starts to talk about chineese things and hIstroy that gets really boring, Who ever made this lagIts cant help them self without going off track and giving us a lecture like we back in school and that tends to get really annoying when he goes off track that takes maybe a chapter for him to get back on track about the novel. sorry lost my cool For a min.
Translation leaves alot to be desired if Im being honest. However the story, the premis, and the characters are well developed and is quite gripping. I cant wait for more chapters!
Your book is good. I like it very much. Keep up the good work. God bless you......................................................................
Finalmente voltou, esta de parabéns, por favor continue com a Historia porque vale muito a pena e muito boa com muito potencial para evoluir.
The story is very interesting the research is well done, character is good. The only criticism I could offer is that the grammar could be improved, albeit, understandable enough for a reader to get the idea.
This story has great potential! Even if the authors englisch could be better and he sometimes losses himself in explaining the history, al of this can be ignored because the story is freaking interesting. The HRE has an extremely complicated political landscape and the time is just at the dawn of the age of descovery so there is so much space for the story to develop and all of which are intriguing. I really wanne see how the story continues. Question to the Athor: is the novel dropped or on hiatus? If not when can we expect the next updates?
This is my first time writing a review on this site I think so I will b blunt the first couple chapters that thus translator did are quite good but after that's its start a down spiral ifeeel like I'm reading a lnmtl its good you did the translations but you getting most of the chapters sentences phrases wrong except when he is stating a historical fact I'm not far in so I don't know about future chapters but I will try to update this review when I read .more I just don't want people getting all hyped up like I was then get disappointed in it like I'd did but for know I don't think you should be locking chapters my friend I think you should work more on enhancing your skills first because from what I read I'm doing efforts in order to understand your translation I think the reader shouldn't be doing this be cause this falls on authoos and translates to make the story more comprehensable I'm not hating the novel but currently this my opinion and suggestions
I am the one who is giving you the story on Webnovel it's not to review the things you do but well l will do it. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>