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40% Juan’s Pokémon adventure / Chapter 1: Chapter 2(A new beginning )

章節 1: Chapter 2(A new beginning )

When I opened my eyes I was inside a stomach then I saw the lights I saw this lady with blue hair which I assumed is my mom first I was surprised then I was happy I was finally happy again. Wait a second I thought I died a while ago and how am I a baby again? And how is my moms hair orange that is not a natural hair color for me.

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I am finally going to become a dad . My name is Ash kechum my wife's name is misty and my newborn son name is Ash J.R but the weird thing is when the baby saw misty he looked surprised but then he was happy.


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