/ Realistic / Journey of life(UNFATHOMABLE LOVE )
摘要
Rosalind who is an adopted daughter of Lily and Jacob.., when her mother Mira went to coma and her father Stephen military man who is also a doctor take care of his wife both went to secret place... And every one thought they died. Can Rosalind find the scheme of things happen behind the scenes to get rid of her parents and avenge them? Or what will happen to her in future.
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Hmm I like the story. Now it may lack of story development but I think I will learn how to make real interesting story soon. Well I have been working on the story short 😅😅😅😧😨😵😌🤗 This is my first story don't mind.
I like the story. It's about a little girl who lost her parents and adopted by lily and Jacob. Her big brother Yuan who will do anything to make his little sister smile, to protect his little sister he mastered martial arts, sword fighting, horse riding and archery in young age and secretly only his sister knows about it. Such a loving and doting and protective big brother little rose have. Well I am the writer of the story though I don't know how to compose the story to your liking of the readers, I like the story. Mm that's enough for me I think.