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This Is The Story Of Ben Tennyson. He has become bored of his life in the Omnitrix Multiverse.
And then he decided to travel to different Multiverse.
But there is a surprise waiting for him, because there he is going to faced many situations.
Will he able to overcome the situation, for k knowing it, please read it.
This Is The My Story, which is little bit linked to Beginning of Multiverse Saga.
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Whoever Think this is copy work. They remember it, both is my work. Just because this is not present on the Webnovel, I added it here.
Message to author: Please continue the fan-fic and Please use the original character name it’s confusing
This is....very weird, but the author is having fun doing it so it's all good! The biggest problem is how dense it is, with too much information being thrown at the reader. Then there's the scale, I came looking forward to read a Ben 10 story but ended up reading stuff about the multiverse, goblin anatomy and the marvel universe for some reason. Also, sharky is a weird name for a protagonist in a modern story.
good story I got no good ben10 on webnovelso this robo story will sufficeps. written by robo
I have read up to Chapter 3, but I'm struggling to understand most of it. It feels like I'm reading a story written by a 10-year-old child. The spelling seems to be fine, but the content is confusing. Even though it describes what he did, it's hard to grasp the meaning. That's the only way I can explain it
Pretty okay at best character does a whole 180 couple of chapters into the story with a character shift couldn’t get used to it or like it maybe someone else might.
It looks like a GPT chat, as the writing is dull and tedious, there's no feeling '-' >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>