*beep* *beep*
' huh why do I hear this noises '
doc: get him to the operation room quick
' oh right I got shot '
' I was in the bank minding my own business
just getting my money and all when I heard
gunshots '
robber1: put your hand in the air and take out
the money
robber2: yeah take'em out or I'll shoot this
*grabs a child* child hahahaha
' and here I thought I'd get back home alive '
*sighs* "here goes nothing"
my feet began to take me to the robber that held the child i never was like the protagonist of those novels unlike them I have a loving family so why am I doing this you might ask why not just once may I help or inspire someone even if it's just a single person
robber1: brother watch out!
robber2: huh?! guh
Lloyd: Child quick get out of here
then I punched the guy in the guts though I'm
not the strongest I do work out
robber1: you son of a gun *click* you asked for it *bang bang bang*
Lloyd: arghhh that hurt
I headbutted the robber before I blacked out
and that's why I'm dying right now wait a minute how can I think???? what why can't I feel my body?? oh maybe I'm now a soul floating in the void or something *boom*
is this my begining??
just trying to write oh and do give me suggestions on anything you that would help me and the story thanks
ps English is not my first language
and first time writing a story ciao
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