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Bam! Bam! Bam!
"You really shouldn't take this to another level, my dear." The rage in his eyes said it all.
"But I can't help it," I smirked.
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I find this book very interesting . It is a very creative story. It is not a typical werewolf novel, it involves various species and their cultures and traditions
What a wonderful book!I am really impressed by the story.Even though its not fully published its amazing.I really enjoyed this book and hope that this book will be popular.
This is a really good one. I like the twist and all, good idea. But there's still work to do on your plot execution. I look forward to your coming books and can't wait to see your progress
Wow, it's kinda exciting series. I love how active the book it is, there are moments where you can relate to the female wolf. I kinda love it, plus the reveal that she is a world Got me. The names are unique too and make you feel interesting. Plus I believe it's a romantic series- with more ***** development. I like it, will read all the chapters
Nice story! The idea is well thought out and original! Besides the few spelling mistakes here and there, it's an awesome book! Keep going and I hope you are successful!
Omg! I liked it very much. The story is good. I'll add it to my library. Even if it has some errors in it, it's okay. Keep going Author. I'm waiting for new chapters...❤
hey there. first of all, I love your story description, and then the story was so interesting. I like the way each characters talks in the chapters. You are so good at character development : )
While the plot is interesting in itself and the world-building is done fantastically, the punctuation could be improved i.e. spaces after a period and before a quote. There are also some missing commas but you usually just read right past them, so it’s not a huge bother. Otherwise, everything is amazing. Characters are unique and the story is different! Keep it up, author!
The story is great with a rational attitude shown by the characters. I felt a bit troubled with the spacing but overall it is a good to story to read. And also found that the character's pov thing kinda unique.. Dunno if it a good stuff or not but I want to let the author know my thought
Not bad, the story has a nice flow but there was lack of description for the world background. I also think that the character is awfully calm for a person who was being captured and trap in a dungeon full of torturing tools.
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Nice book with drama.I hope the female lead would be more strong. But I really likr this book.It has nice concept about not giving up. But I must really thank the writer for such an amazing book.
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The story is cool, a little bit different than what imagined from the usual werewolf story. However, it is quite hard to read (cuz the lack of space between the lines). Overall, the story is good! Keep up the good work!
Werewolf related stories had a massive spot on my heart... I used to read so many of this genre since the written plot regarding the story usually impresses me. I would really love to know more about their interaction and such and to journey more with the conflicts that goes around it. BTW, I love the characters so much. So keep up the good job!
My Merciless Alpha is a really good book with lots of potential, the author could improve on some of her aspects of writing but the book itself is spectacular! Would definitely recommend.
I really think the different POV’s are what makes this novel special. Makes you see all sides of the characters. And I always enjoy a good FL. So don’t overwork yourself and stay healthy !
I have read about 8 chapters from the 21 published so far. My honest opinion. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good. The story is progressing well. Character design is well thought of. There world background is good but a little more description would have lead to authenticity. As far as the writing quality is concerned, the flow is good. A few typing errors are noticed as well as punctuation mistakes. All these can be addressed if you run your chapters through the free online grammar checker. The other thing I notice is that the pace of the book is too fast at some places. Please slow down. At this rate your book will completed very quickly unless you duplicate a few plots. On the whole a good read. All the best, author!
I love a unique story that includes various cultures. Read a few chapters of it and I'm already intrigued. Loved the background of the story as well... Great work author!!!
Pretty good overall. I'm not someome who usualky enjoys fantasy with romance alone but this seems to work. The world building is pretty good, the characters written well and, save for a few errors, is a good read
do we all remember how well received the twilight was in the past especially the books, but it went down fast! and why I mentioned twilight because this story reminded me of it. the only difference is here we already have better characters, they are more interesting, the female lead is way better, the characters around her, the drama that can unfold in the future will be amazing. this novel can go far if the author wants it to. liked the family of the female lead, and it seemed like the world is dominated by the males who knows maybe she will shift the balance with her unique powers.
Anyone who gives me reviews on this book shouldn't be spam. I am searching for fake accounts and if I find that you are trying to pirate or abuse my readers in the comment section I will actively delete the comments and reviews. This is a copyrighted book so don’t plagiarise. Happy reading!