摘要
Su Ming transmigrated. He realized that he was getting married! Moreover, his wife was a gorgeous-looking woman. Su Ming instantly felt that this was his lucky day! However, on the night of the wedding, when Su Ming was ready for their first night together, an old monk suddenly appeared in the room. The monk said to Su Ming directly, “You can’t marry her! She’s a demon!” Just then, Su Ming saw his wife show three furry tails! Right at this moment, the Choice System is bound to him! “Choice one: Question your wife on why she has foxtails, and express that you can’t accept a fox demon as your wife. Reward: Divorce with Su Yuer.” “Choice two: Pretend to be unaware, then report it to the Demon Capture Alliance tomorrow. Help the Demon Capture Alliance catch the fox demon. Reward: Ancient demon capturing cultivation method.” Choice three: Accept your wife’s identity as a fox demon, continue to love and care for her as you’ve always done. Reward: Ancient Divine Weapon: Devil Slaying Sword.” Facing these three choices...
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寫檢討Love the premise, hate the execution. The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together. There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip. I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
The author lacks IQ and the MC lacks EQ. A monk says his wife is a demon 3 times and tells the MC to separate from her. However, he still follows the monk on a demon hunting organization. He had to be a little careful, but he acts like he owns the place. Since my wife is a demon, I won't tell her that I work as a demon hunter. This only shows the immaturity of the MC, generating cliché situations in sequence. The story is completely disappointing.
揭示劇透Story is meh, interactions are forced. Fir example: bold agent guy says your wife is a fox spirit. MC be like: Okay.…. Bold agrnt guy: that dude is too clam send more people to observe him! Bold dude’s Boss then is like: He is not ordinary so therefore we must recruit him! I can see the strings in this novel so I’ll give it a One star in Story development Character design is meh so 2 stars. World background is 1 star as the spirit group government agency is like the rest of the novel is very poorly thought out.
not good , the story is a mess with no details about anything, the fighting sucks and there is no description of the characters appearance or background
Ironically despite me not liking romance themed novel I find its the only decent one out of the entire batch guess cause it doesn't focus on romance
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cautiously looking forward to this one. dmosmamdidndjcicidkpwpw,cmcnidieoskdmfjfieoskcnjrieowlkdjiqowieifiei28cjdjekiwjcjdkwkksnckeo2kemmdp
bruh why start with a good chapter then destroy it after that? men this is worse than a noob writer or just the translation sucks also is even the minor characters alive i hope so.... they're so dumb for an organization who doesn't even understand how to Manage power and greed and the story feels so rushed that you don't even know if this is a romance at all😵
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
this book is really good it has action romance a mystery and super powers i was waiting for it to get to the voting stage but it dosnt seem to be going thet far but there is not a single book in the voting section worth voting on
This one is quite good compare to some of the usual trash we does get every week . Although the story is a little lacking the concept is still interesting. Plus I can't find the raws, so I hope their pick this novel as well. P.S if anyone do find the RAWS please do comment it.
to put it in a wierdo way yet one that is very common I like how the mc is strong but still learning I don't like how he still hasn't mentioned that he knows keep up the good work and I hope to read more about bears
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obviously I choose option 3 so I get a beautiful wife and a divine weapon, what more could I ask for?.....................................................