/ Urban / It's my dream (English version)
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I'am, Zahrana Bilqis, a beautiful name given to me by my parents which means "beautiful flower." Mom and Dad love me very much. Even though Papa has two more children from his previous marriage.
My life is happy to have two stepsisters, we love each other. Ever since I was little, they always looked after me when I played, or when Mother was away at work. Until I grew up, we still respect each other. It was never proven by words, that stepbrothers were evil or julid in my family.
Lately, I often see Mother alone in the room, when Papa is not at home or is out of town. Yesterday when I walked into Mother's room, she was wiping away her tears, it looked like she had been crying. When asked, the answer was not feeling well.
I've known for a long time that Papa's ex-wife always interferes with Mother's life. It was as if he couldn't accept seeing Brother and Sister love Mother more. He did everything he could to make Papa and my two stepsisters hate Mother.
Now I'm an adult, a student at a well-known state faculty in my city. I won't let anyone hurt you. Even if it's my dad.
Hey, reader, keep on following the story until it's finished! Don't forget to like, comment and rate, thank you.
Don't forget to stop by in my other stories too.
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😭😭😭Pengorbanan seorang Ibu, sudah menyayangi anak-anak tiri dengan setulusnya, ada saja pengganggu. maklum si mantan tidak bahagia kali, jadi ngusik RT orang. smoga happy ending♥️♥️♥️
definisi dari tidak semua ibu tiri itu jahat, suka banget smaa ceritanya eh tapi untuk para mantan istri yang menyebalkan, ingin sekali kucekik lehernya sampai patah😀😀
This novel is recomended, i'm curious with the plot, the story is interesting and touching.. Fight for update thor, i will waiting for this!!!!!
this story really touches the heart, a sacrifice one day will not be in vain, even though there are many obstacles in the way, keep writing thor!😭😭💙
Having a stepbrother and sis is good too if there are no problems like me who are safe with all of them hahaha ditunggu kelanjutannya Thor, semangat
This story has an interesting plot and is very fun. goodddd👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍stay healthy and keep it up sisssss. good luck✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
This is really recomeded novel to all readers out there. I hope you can enjoy the novel too like i do. For the author, keep continue this novel till the end. Well done[img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=coins][img=exp]
arghhhh... kok sedih si, pengorbanan oh pengorbanan memang menyedihkan ya😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 yuk deh kak next terus, tetap semangat jangan nangis kalau lagi nulis 🤭
kak hebat, dengan bhasa inggris, membuat sebuah novel. pokonya is the best. semangat berkarya yah, dan semangat nulisnya juga kak autor.👌👌👌💪💪💪
Nice work too, keep writing ok. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The book cover also interesting.
Halo, Opinisme di sini!!!! Semangat terus upnya kak jangan kasih kendor💪💪💪 Bagus ceritanya english version bisa dibaca di semua negara, bukan di indo aja
Luar biasa banget pengorbanan ibu untuk anak-anak meskipun mereka tidak ada ikatan darah alias kandung :) Ga sedikit ibu yang menelantarkan anak tirinya huum :(
Huhu cerita Broken home Kaya gini Yang biasanya suka bikin mewek kalau dibawa😭 tapi suka nagih ceritanya. Lanjut thor semangat lanjutkan part berikutnya🔥✨
keren ini, sebuah pengorbanan besar. bawang banget dah ini novel🤭☺️☺️☺️☺️ semangat kak nulisnya. 🥀🥀🥰🥰🥰🥰👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
something like this is really happen in the real world. the ex wife should asks her self why her children are loving their step mother more than her. not blaming to the new wife :( not all step mothers are evil, tho. there are step mothers who love their step children like their own.
This story contains many family words. more to the family. parents who love their children.. hmm I like this ... I'm waiting for the next part
Wah, what a beautiful name 'Zahrana Bilqis' Yes, be a tough daughter for your mom Zahrana Although father is a daughter's first love, you have to love your mom more...
It's very touchy and sad story.. I recommend this story.. Keep it up, Thor[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Harus dibaca dan masukkan ke reading list. Kisah menyentuh, dan benar-benar adanya. Anak kuat, gadis kuat. Eh, ini juga menarik. Karena aku jarang liat saudari tiri akur, wkwkw. Masih dua bab, kumenunggu ....
gw juga broken home dan punya dua adik tiri, dan gw tulus menyayangi mereka..bedanya di keluargaku tidak terdapat konflik seperti yang novel ini sajikan... overall keren bgt dari ide cerita dan penulisannya..mantul dah.. 🤩🤩🤩