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The sky turned red, and meteors fell. Screams and explosions everywhere. For an unknown reason, people started having magic abilities.... Most were happy, but it didn't last long. Soon came the undead. To survive, kill, or be killed.
Her mom disappeared. She was betrayed by her ex-fiance' and killed by her step-sister.
Now she's back a year before the apocalypse, equip with magical space, this time will it be the same?
Warning: mature scenes, gore & violence.
Hi readers, I'm an amateur author. Please be lenient with me. This is my first novel, so please allow me to grow. Suggestions will be appreciated. Thanks!!!
This story, characters, and places are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people, places, and events is purely coincidental.
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Its a good story and i like it..... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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I like stories that involve dimensional pocket spaces. This story has a good pace though sometimes details are lost. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It is an amazing beginning for an ******* author and i am hooked already by this novel. Congrats and looking forward for more chapters and novels to come.
Dropped at chapter 3 for following reasons 1 grammar is awfull 2 attempts at creating conspiracies within MCs back story is fucking pointless 3 instead of Having MC remember numbers from a lottery ticket just gives her 5 billion dollars for preparation 4 the lawyer who is giving her the mothers will, with assets within the billions would have teams of lawyers not a singular one, and it need to at least be signed for or it would be followed up by some government it wouldn't be possible for it to go to in-laws 5 petty excuse for no father in her life, even worse excuse for mother Chapter 1 was average to great your story went to shit moment you deviated from preparing for apocalypse
An ability perfect for pandemic lockdown. My portable fallout shelter. If receive a text message about an incoming ballistic missile, i'd be ready
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I am really looking forward to seeing where this wonderful story will go. The fist 60 something chapters are a little fast paced, but not so much that it is confusing or off putting. This book is right up my alley. It's got a fluffy romance, a rebirth, a magical space, a mysterious disappearance, and an up coming apocalypse. What more do you need??? Except.... More chapters please!!!!
More updatesssss! Please !!!!!!!! Quiero ver la reaccion del ex prometido, al averiguar que lo que paso fue planeado por las dos.[img=recommend][img=update]
Finally, a book where either of the MC’s smoke. No nasty cigarettes showing up except for occasional (at stressful) times. Good to have a story wEre there isn’t a misunderstanding between the FL and the ML, still drama around them but the deal with it together and on their own. Waiting for updates 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Really like the story and like the characters. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Beautiful Magnificent Amazing Reallyjust a work of art, almighty, comedical and just a very nice story overall I can't wait for the next update
I love this plot line. She has a whole year to get ready for the Apocalypse. So, I’m so glad this book is in this app. I started reading it in another one but I like this app better (more books). 🥰😍😄😍😍😍😍😄😄😄🥰🥰🥰🥰
I really like the story and its plot. The only thing I need is the new updates of the chapters. please update more and thank you for creating this story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Hello author I’d just like to say that this novel ahould be in the top 10’s or at least top 100’s because it is just to perfect not to be so high up there:) again im not sure why bad novels that steal copy and are repetitive with the same synopsis gets much more attention than This novel does. I wish people opened/Open their eyes to see that this novel and you author deserve to be at the top:) i love you author keep up the good work:) Author fighting!
Hello author im looking forward with the novel I like plot its intriguing ..... and i hope that more update to come ... i will be waiting also i will support this novel .... good luck im it a good review 5 stars for you author.....
Like the story, a positive approach on dealing the coming apocalypse. Cute couple. Space magic, very handy specially farming. Well, don't forget mermaids. I wonder what will happen to the story. Keep it up please, its interesting.
Apocalypse rebirth magic ,i'm shamelessly rating my novel. When i wrote the synopsis,i wasnt thinking much so now that i see it, its dull hahahah dunno if i can edit it. anyways please dont judge it right a way and give me a little of your time. Please give me some hearts likes and power stones,waiting for comments and suggestions!thankie much!mwamwamwa!
I like the story and would love to read more, however, there needs to be work done on the grammar and character design. The story is good, overall. I don't know if this was the writer's intention or not but the MC is leaning heavily towards being a Mary-Sue. Which, while I don't mind it, it IS annoying that she knows there is trouble and literally WALKS IN AND BACK OUT OF IT WITHOUT PROBLEMS! Okay, the evil girl makes very clear signs about her plans but COME ON! Can't they at least be a bit more secretive and difficult to handle for the MC? Is that too much to ask? I also find it annoying how you write the male lead off as cold and distant in the beginning but the moment he meets her (love at first sight and whatnot) he is all over her and completely changes into a charming, happy man with barely a single sign that he is a germaphobe. Can you please write out his personality clearer? Is he a cold and distant man or a warm-hearted one? Also make sure the MC has FLAWS! The fact that she learns things without showing (or at least not to my knowledge) any trouble makes it hard to see her as a person and more as a robot that learns and quickly adapts to everything. How about you show some limits? Show that she's not an emotional robot that can quickly fit in with any problem (just like her best friend for that matter). Her best friend is also like that; any girl that was almost assaulted would be upset yet she laughs it off as a mere joke. BE. SERIOUS. Don't let them laugh off difficult life problems as if it's nothing. Losing your life can be traumatic (in my opinion) and being assaulted even more. Try to give more depth to the characters, give us more details about them. And for bloody he*l's sake don't turn every couple in a Love-at-first-sight romance. It's old and VERY unrealistic. Other than that, it's good. Try to work around those points and you'll do just fine. [img=recommend]
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I really like this story and I can't wait for the next update. I also am wondering if you are going to have Isabella collect bee's for honey? I'd also like to know the update schedule for this book.
This novel is truly engaging leaving its readers to look forward to the next chapter. Although a little fast-paced in the beginning, the writer was able to arouse curiosity wanting to discover more about the secrets and lies that surrounded the past of Isabella. I recommend to read Isabella’s Magical Space to have a glimpse of the writer’s broad imagination that will lead you through an exciting journey. A must read definitely! ❤️