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When I died, I never thought I'd get a second chance at life, let alone another chance as the protagonist of an anime. Getting another chance in a world with Snake pedos, heart thieves, and peepers with doomsday capabilities wasn't a part of the memo. But I ain't selling my life cheap, that's for damn sure. Male OC NarutoInsert. Chapters 1-4 prologue.
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Simply bad, there's no point reading this story, the MC is useless, his sister is an useless OC who brings nothing to the story. The author can't stick to one Perspective to save his life, seriously when the author change between 1st and 3rd perspective every two sentences it's a clear sign to drop the story...
1 year time skip for nothing? He's doing nothing for what he intended to do to prevent Uchiha Massacres. By reaching out to Itachi. 😅😅😅😅 Poor Itachi. What a pity. I know because you were so lazy so there is no major change for the entire plot. But, instead of that, you were ruining everything for that forced drama.
Read this book on fanfiction.net and loved it. Just one thing. Is this really going to be a harem story? I thought you of all wouldn't follow that trope? Considering your other harry potter fanfic has a single love interest.
I can't see the potential of this novel……okay……I can't see anything in this novel...................................................,.....................
Je vais écrire en français. L'intention est bonne mais sincèrement je n'arrive pas à accompagner. Il ya trop d'informations. Après 3 chapitres je ne sais encore pas qui est le personnage principal. Il semble que c'est Naruto et sa sœur jumelle est un Oc. Mais c'est un peut confu. Il ya vraiment trop d'informations. Je lirai peut être après quand j'aurai un peu de temps à perdre. En fait je. Crois pas que soit m'a taxe de thé les fan_fic qui son trop sombre. Bem on verás bien. Sde toute manière félicitations à l'auteur vue qu'il n'est pas facile d'être écrivain.
mc is a reincarnated person that Acts like a child ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Loveee itttt. Is it going to be naruto x rin? If so, then good. If not, then please do so......................................................
I really appreciate your writing style, you flesh out the story very well. You give the whole Story a nice, but also realistic rendition around the Reincarnation theme, with all that entails. I also like the details around beeing a Ninja and real life consequences around the killing and the after effects. I hope you keep writing this Novel =)
Loved it on Ao3, been waiting for updates You can literally feel the increase in quality of writing if you compare the first and the latest chapter. Hope for more updates [img=recommend]
This is an amazing story it really shows a lot of detail to all the character involved and it doesn't just revolve around Naruto and Sasuke.I don't know how to explain but this is a amazing story
Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update! Please Update!
the entire Uchiha clan was wasted. how weak your imagination is. in your fik, all adults are just complete idiots. this only makes it sadder to read this cal. instead of stretching your psychological monologue, you would write something really interesting, and at least a little logical.
This is the best Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. It's different from the other fanfictions with perfect mc that can do anything and have seemingly no challenges along the way.Also additional points for not following the cannot and making your story unique.
a lot of great stuff about this story. character development, emotionally and physically. unique perspective, positive changes to the storyline. deviating from the plot. long chapters and good updating speed. but I still can't say this is a favorite fanfic of mine yet. I feel there is a balance needed and this story is on the opposite end of what normal fanfics seem to be. this is driven by character development and drama and not action and plot. which I like but I think there is a balance and this story seems to focus more on development than pushing the plot forward. it overshadows everything. lessons learned, relearned, and evolved seems to be the main focus. The action scenes seem to only be there to learn a lesson. and the author likes throwing sticks in front of the MC to trip him up a bit too often, it can become stale and a bit forced. But even so this story is worth the read. its emotionally stimulating and its nice having such long chapters to read.
At first I thought it was too depressing... Which it was, but the more I read the better it got. It had a comedy tag which I didn't find in the first 10 chapters... But after that it became funnier and funnier. And the length of chapters is nothing to scoff at... The character build up is also very good and realistic.. Infact, so realistic that it was like reading a real life story of someone broken into something strong... So, overall it is one of, if not the best Naruto FF I've ever read... Goodluck to the author for the good work and keep it up till you finish it... 🤟🤟🤟
Simplemente dejaré mi reseña y me iré, no es mi taza de te está historia simplemente me deja un mal sabor de boca el echo de que al mc lo traten como un muñeco de práctica en cada pelea
I want to truly thank you for writing this story it is an amazing novel. it's not one of the. best fan fics I have read it is The Best naruto fanfiction I have read you think through how the people would think you go around doing everything great I wish I could write like you
After reading this naruto novel you look at other Naruto novels differently. They will all look like garbage. The character description in this novel hits different. The emotions come across as real. Really Good novel thanks author.
This, to be honest is the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. It is simply stunning, it is also a comedic masterpiece. The depth of emotion and the interactions between the characters are beautifully written. Quite often when you read the typical fanfic it glosses over the formative years of Naruto’s life and skips straight to academy graduation with very little to no actual detail about what he does. Or the other most common trope of a 5 ish chapter long training montage that starts when he is two and just spams shadow clones. As of chapter 18 my honest opinion on this fanfic has no rival of similar length on this platform. Thank you author for this beautiful story and good luck with all future chapters