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摘要
"The boy has no powers," they claimed.
And thus, the Son of strongest Warlock was declared useless and sent to his death.
But was it really possible for the son of the greatest heroes of humankind to be useless? Or was it the biggest mistake the humans made that cost them everything and drove a potential Warlock to the dark side?
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Lucifer Azarel was the son of humanity's strongest Awakened humans, in a world where people awakened various powers.
After his parents perished for the sake of humanity, he was sent to the government facility so that they could keep an eye on his powers when they awakened. Unfortunately, even after 5 years, his powers didn't awaken.
The government gave up on the boy and allowed the scientists to use him as an experimental subject for their painful tests on the human bodies, but on the first test itself, Lucifer died. He saw the smile on the scientist's face even as he took his last breath.
Was it truly the end?
But what happens when the boy truly awakens? What if he awakened not one, but more than four powers that were capable of destroying the world itself if used properly?
The strongest Warlock who could have been humankind's greatest protector was driven to become it's biggest enemy.
What happens when the boy that has awakened several powers at once starts seeking vengeance.
Can the protectors of humanity face the wrath of the Strongest Warlock? Can they stop the person who kills without blinking? Or are they destined to be swallowed by the Darkness they created?
Join the journey of the Most Powerful Warlock...
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At the moment( chapter 308) all I can say is perfect and amazing, I admire the character development of lucifer from a naive and emotional brat to a calm and collected young man and his goal change after he got his revenge. Oh and don't misunderstand me he is still evil its just before he was a newborn snake who is thirsty for revenge but know he is a cunning one who only strikes when the time is right and never misses. and author if it doesn't spoil anything would you mind telling if ayn will become a potential lover b/c it will be like love&hate relationship but I it's fine even if it isn't. overall It's a great novel to read.
A very well balanced book with a stable world build and great character development! Just love how the mc grows and widens his view, and slowly grows closer to other characters! Very well written!
Even though the idea of this book seemed nice the author doesn't seem to understand people that much and is totally focusing on the black instead of the practical gray. Also the world built is very bare and is left with a lot of plot holes.
Edit review. Okey I'm on chapter 100+ Novel is awsome must say. There are some inconsistencies in start but they are explainable tho. Novel feels alive and interesting. There is no useless filler, everything is interesting to read and personages have personalities to them. Don't belive reviews about battles , they are interesting. That MC is naive? Yeah a little, he is basically 10y.o who got brutally murdered and betrayed. Most likely traumatized beyond repair. He got strong abilities but still can lose and LOGICALLY, not cause "plot armor". Just keep reading it gets better.
Author Review! Alright, after 21 days of this book release and seeing the reactions, I think I am finally ready to review my book. So here it goes: Story Development: It's a Story about a boy who was thought to be powerless in a world where a lot of people awakened with various abilities. Pretty standard, right? But that's when things changed. Seeing that he was useless, they used him for their experiments to test how much pain a human body could bear. Unfortunately, this test didn't stop before he died. His body was tossed away only for him to Awaken finally, not with one ability but with many more. The kid who was thought to be a useless human was someone who was out for revenge. At its core, it seems like a revenge story, but it spreads out in many exciting directions, which I'm sure some of you will like. It's also a villain vs. heroes story where good variants and MC are on the opposite side. World Background: It's a story set in a modern world It'll be a profound and interconnected world. It's a world where Dungeons exist, but monsters can't come out of the dungeons. They can only come out when certain conditions are met. And to make sure that doesn't happen, there are various Organizations. It's also a world where people Awaken with power, so there are crimes involving them, and there are also heroes who stop them and catch the Dark Variants. The world will also involve many more things. I don't think any amount of words can explain it here. So please read. Character Design: I'm trying to make the characters unique, but you shall be the judge of that. I can't comment on this. Update Stability: Daily updates with bonus chapters every Monday or Tuesday. So 5 star :p Writing Quality: I try not to make any errors, but where there's a human, there will be errors, so please forgive me if you see one or two mistakes once in a while. Last Words: I'm sure if you come with an open mind to enjoy a story, you'll like it. It's a pretty interesting story, and it gets even better later. PS: Some people say the story gets a bit dark on occasions, so... reader's warned if they don't like that? But I don't feel like it's too dark, so please be the judge of that. (´；ω；｀) Have a great day, thanks for going through such a long review Yours Obediently, Demo- Oh god, why am I writing it like a letter now? (ᗒᗩᗕ) JK, honestly, though, I hope you'll enjoy what you read. If you don't like anything, please comment or inform me in my DMs.
The author already started to drag fights out by chapter 33 when the mc could have ended it easily. Everyone except the mc is evil and hates little kids. The people that are evil arent even logically evil. They just hate the mc for no reason. The first reaction we saw in the story was people wanting to literally beat him up because he was a 10 year old orphan and no one even tried to stop them. All of the worldbuilding is done through conversations which leads to random side characters talking way too much about information that isnt relevant for the current situation at that part in the story. There is also the extreme edge coming out of the mc that comes off as cringe instead of cool.
There is nothing bad i can say about the novel till now, i even went as far as buying privileges :0 Firstly you need to understand that the author tried to display the mentality of a child that has a no farsighted thinking process. I thought it would annoy me but in the newer chapters 140-150+ you can see a nice development. The novel is a solid 9/10 (till now) Keep up the good work i will wait for updates hehe
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hm, it may be only 22 chaps in but if it keeps going the way its going, then im 10000% sure that this story will be a massive hit. Idek what i can say that will make u NOT wanna read this story, honestly, just read it. If you dont like it then ciao, but if u do then add it to ur library. Ik i did😊✌🏽
Isn't it just so great when you find one of those books that completely drags you in🤩, makes you fall in love with the characters😍, and demands that you sit on the edge of your seat for every horrific, nail-biting moment of it🤫? This is one of those kind of books... ☺️Author thank you so much for such a great book☺️ Hope your book should earn alot🥳 along with massive votes and I am sure you are one among the person who loot Spirity treasure... 😍Wish you all the Success Chikkuuu 😍
Whoaaa!!! This is my cuppa tea. I like OP characters, especially those with a mission. The synopsis says it all. The MC was deemed useless because his powers didn't awaken, mistreated and then he would rise like a phoenix and teach those people a bitter lesson. Kind of reminds me of Battle Through The Heavens. This trope is very popular and never tiring to read for a reason. But, even though the premise is a bit cliche, I have faith in the amazing author to mix the story with his own recipe and make it special, just like his other books. For one, he already spiced up the story by making his MC a villain. Can't wait to see more characters fleshed out so we get to see the 'heroes' too. The pace is perfect, not too slow nor too fast. In three chapters you already get the solid foundation for the story. Give it a read now now now!
Not a very unique idea, which isn't necessarily a bad thing if you make it unique through good character and plot development, but the 'protagonist' is simply bad...I don't have another word to describe it. The story starts off by giving a reasonable explanation for how the 'protagonist' ends up the way he is, and his abilities are fun to follow along with, but as I read, I just find that I hate the main character more and more. He is a 10 year old child that didn't have guidance and ended up psychotic, which is something that can reasonably happen, but its simply an unpleasant read because of his awful personality and characteristics. Having a main character that just goes around killing people is simply not appealing to me. perhaps he gets redemption later on where I have not read, but I already quite dislike him as a character and all in all it has got me bored enough to stop reading. I'm sure some people would enjoy having an irredeemable main character like this, but I dont. Usually when I enjoy a story with a main character such as this, there are other aspects that make it worth reading like comedy or uniqueness, but this doesn't seem to show signs of such yet. Again, I'm sure this kind of story is appealing to some people but I personally do not reccomend.
I’m not gonna waste my time writing a long review so in short, this novel is bad. The characters are all stupid and the main character does not have a personality apart from killing everyone. The author does not understand how the government would actually operate. Like a secret facility kills the son of the two greatest hero’s and no one investigates this… like what. I quit on chapter 40 because the book was simply making me mad at the amount of stupidity. Give it a try, if you manage to turn your brain off you might enjoy.
I have read till chapter 200 and the story has been fine albeit some inconsistencies here and there. There is not much descriptions about the world in itself. The character development is mediocre and the side characters has no depth. My man also has a rinnegan on the cover page.
Updated review after three months! Character: We follow the journey of a young boy who wanted to be a hero like his deceased parents, but the cruelty of a few people forced him to his death, making him here others as he died. He revived with the help of his abilities that finally awakened, setting off his future path of revenge. At the start, he is untrusting and inexperienced about the ways of the world. The only things he has are his immensely powerful abilities and his thirst for revenge. After finishing his revenge, he sets off a series of events that force him towards his true goal that he never knew he had. He becomes older and more mature during the arc after his revenge is over. Less of a brute fighter and more of a Strong yet Clever Warlock who sets off on a path for himself that couldn't be imagined by anyone. The path of an Inhuman Warlock that was one day going to scare every being in the vast universe. PS: His true history is much deeper than seen in the first volume, as hinted at the end of the revenge arc. ... World Background: The world is more than it seems, encompassing many different yet interesting prospects that will become clear in later chapters, especially after the revenge. That will also make the title of the novel more clear. The world only gets deeper as the novel progresses, with many elements of the story coming together. Updating Stability: Two chapters every day with bonus chaps every Monday. Thank you for reading the review. I hope you join the journey and stay with me as the MC becomes when he is destined to be. I'm sure you won't be disappointed.
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Make the way readers, Innocent soul Seven is here for a review. I am writing this review after reading the initial few chapters. Let's summarise everything in short. The story begins with a ten year old kid, who got to know he can't awaken his power, like his parents, who were the greatest superheros of that century. He was depressed about it when the evil scientists used him for an experiment and killed him in this process. Here comes the most anticipated plot twist, he isn't dead yet, and according to the clues given on chapter 3 I think the MC will develop some kind of Super Healing ability (Not sure yet, will bug demonic to release more chapters later) Back to main point, this novel ends after that much, cause only 3 super long chs are uploaded till now. And every chapter has a big fcking cliffhanger 🙄😒😢 (Cliffhanger=Bad for my reader spirit, have to wait another day for some more chapters, sigh...) Till now all I can tell that the story is super exciting, filled with suspense and cliffhangers, a little cliched plot, but hey we all like that cliched part!! No need to tell writing style is very simple but highly descriptive and neat. Just waiting for more chapters now, if I don't get, I just have to use the other way ✨✨ (Spam the author in his comments section)
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It's pretty clear the author doesn't understand how people act. Over ninety percent of characters act like deranged psychopaths, even ordinary civilians. The protagonist is also ridiculous. He is, by far, the most evil and crazy protagonist I've seen.
This is trash, reading this hurts my brain. Not a good developed story, its like the author making up bull as he/she wrights. The characters are so flat and unrealistic
So I normally give 10 chapters or so for a novel to draw me in and what really ticks me off is when the author forces characters to make decisions or have certain emotions. The author seems to force the direction of the story in the way he wants it to go and have the characters feel what he wants them to feel. It just seems unnatural and just comes across as another edgy protagonist. Granted it might improve later in the story but I’m not willing to take a gamble on it changing to put in hours of reading.
I read 11 chapters, maybe an inexperienced author, maybe just not to my taste. In general, there are a lot of questions, why, why, why. Usually the author devotes little or much of the opening chapters to motives, cause and effect. Here a whole chapter is devoted simply to the guesses of two people who have nothing to do with the further plot, they go and guess, guess and go, what was that? Perhaps it will be better further, but I will never know. But thanks for trying) I'll put 3.8 just because I haven't read much, but I wanted to speak.
The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters