/ Anime & Comics / Indra Chakra Broke Out At The Beginning
摘要
After crossing to Naruto World , considering the relationship between Konoha and Uchiha, and based on the principle of shooting the first bird, Ryu has always been a low-key person even he has the standard plug-in of a traverser.
[Ding, you defeat the Uchiha Madara (Junior Edition) projection, and get: Indra Chakra, Fire Dunge, Fire Fighting! 】
[Ding, you defeat the Thousand-Hand Projection Senju Hashirama , and get: Ashura Chakra, Perfect Sage Human Body 】
Low profile? Low profile, my ass!
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God of Naruto Cedar
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Romance chinês,😮💨 a tradução frita minhas células cerebrais. A premissa da história é interessante, mas ter que formar uma frase coerente enquanto ler me dá dor de cabeça.🤦🏻♂️
This novel seemed to be primarily generated through machine translation rather than careful human authoring and editing. Even the title and content of the first paragraph appear to have been directly copied without changes from the machine translation output. The lack of review and oversight is even more apparent when considering the user account that uploaded this work. It seems this same account directly copy-pasted the machine translated output without any editing or formatting changes, not even basic things like title formatting or attribution.
Amazing Story. This is my first review because this story is one of the best i read. updates are done on time but there are some mistakes like some Strange names rest is great . Great mc and everything. nailed it
Don't waste time unless you want to fry your brain. Chinese and you know Chinese stuff. A lot of mistakes if i get a chance then I will translate it on my page.I may be new in the writing area but at least I know some proper sentences, despite English not being my mother language
Şimdiye kadar okuduğum en kötü fanfic olabilir, yazım çok kötü ama öyle böyle değil beyninizi kullanmanız gerekiyor olay akışını siz kendiniz çözmeniz lazım. Her anlamda berbat bi yazım, sayın yazardan özür dilerim ama okuyucu olarak bunları söylemeliydim.
Nice history, awesome.Very nice......more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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La traducción apesta y no has arreglado nada de la escritura. img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Sinto cheiro de oriental [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Name mc : Ryu Mtl Chinese Supremacy Cringeeeeeeeeeee [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I really enjoy it. MC is reincarnated as an Uzumaki with a cheat. So if you like that kinda thing, I'd recommend it. The only thing is that the translation is hard to understand sometimes or they use words to describe ninjas that I've never heard used before.
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