/ Anime & Comics / In One Piece with the Ironman Armor
摘要
Sengoku: I want various destroyers, battleships, and super soldier potions.
Vegapunk : I want the T-Virus
Dragon: I want a lot of AK47 rifles, armored vehicles and T72 tanks.
Kings of Countries: We want Terminator T800 and T1000 robots as bodyguards.
Itami smiled : No problem, as long as you join me.
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Good, i like the history 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
It's pretty good, the only thing I don't like is the mass murder of so many civilians and soldiers just following orders and I'm sure this will be repeated in the future just to rule the world, call me dainty, sissy or whatever, but it's not my thing xd I would have occupied an uninhabited island and from there began to earn a reputation, either by intercepting world government ships containing slaves, etc. Removing that and some other grammatical error such as calling the mc by "her", I recommend it
Veryvery fun and good.......................-----------------------------------------_-__-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_-__-
I like the story i hope the author update more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Its okay. Not bad but the grammar can definitely be worked on. If the author checks over and edits the translates this fanfic can definitely be top 20 in my best fanfics ive read
iirc i have read this somewhere before, can you tell me the original?