/ Anime & Comics / In Naruto World, With Inventory Skill.
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Found himself alone, he took a moment to survey his surroundings. The dense forest of the Land of Rain stretched out before him, To find shelter and to avoid danger. And then he realized that he have a cheat like ability too.
With infinite Storage and Items, nothing bad will happen right?
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It was great until the AI started writing. [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry]
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The novel is written by an AI, so while there aren’t major issues, it does suffer from a common flaw—lack of a human touch. The writing feels a bit robotic at times. That said, the story development is solid, and the MC isn’t overly smart or OP, which adds a layer of humor, especially with his occasionally questionable IQ moments. Overall, if the writing had a bit more human warmth, it would elevate the experience even further. But despite that, the story development makes it worth reading. Good luck, and I hope you upload more chapters soon!
It's good i hope you continue with this good work 👍