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So what if they have Byakugan or Sharingan, my observation haki is better. They want to chop me down? Bamm Arnament Haki. They can use different ninjutsu and defeat me? So what it's not like i can't use ninjutsu.
I am going to be the strongest and live my life freely.
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寫檢討See I will be quite honest here this FIC is kind of adverse and complicated the first fault is MC is arrogant. See I don't complain about arrogant MC but in this case, the mc portrays himself as a god in some situations which is kind of unsatisfying or let's just say nor up to the mark like scenario and other thing is MC goal which is not, whenever you write a Fic Mc should have some sort of wish which he wants achieve throughout the course of the story and in this Fic, it is kind of lacking in this fic he is just showing he is strong and unbeatable(not completely but still) and arrogant that's it nothing else. well I am not completing author or anything, I am simply explaining my view regarding how I personally perceive this fic, and another thing is to read it yourself, it is not bad at all it's just that it could have been better with a different MC personality Note to author: Nothing personal dude but you could have done better and
The MC has a young master syndrome, and always has a stick up in where the sun dont shine. He is arrogant and doesn't have the strength to back it up (just yet).
*In Naruto With Haki* is a better title. Anywayd, where was I? Well, the novel isn’t all that realistic, Naruto World wise. The MC is basically a typical Young Master, unrivaled genius. He does reflect on his mistakes, though.
has potential . .........I I 6am 6th grade students are you at least a little bit of the strong and lois is a very good person who has been a good person for Nothing like
Honestly that could have been Good but it really isn’t i mean nearly no character developpEment the interactions seems forced and that’s like you didN’t even read the souRce material it’s really bad
Ninjutsu is useless, even the socalled s tank jutsu are no more than that to the powerful of the one pièce World, only hashirama and Madara Can have a place in that World of Monsters, kage are merely vice admiral powerful people
this , i young master am from inuzuka great clan unrivaled between heaven and earth, i can do whatever i want , you peasant must bow down to my greatness and my handsomeness....
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This is gonna be the 10th review so ye. Idk what to say because i am gonna be bias cause it's my book but i think this is kind of sick, read it and form ur own opinion but if they are bad opinion keep it to yourself.
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Author is very cool, I'm also very cool, you would be also very cool if you gave this 5 stars...........................................................
good story, terrible main character. The mc acts like a young master, he challenegs peope straight up and acts like a child.🤔🤔🤔[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
start quiet good at the beginning, have potential, but there is no explanation or prologue like many other naming senses is all over the place the plot makes no sense for me. it a lazy written one, it feel like author to lazy to write detail and just write part he like.
I absolutely loved the novel. I wish there was some details at the beginning chapters about yama’s one piece powers and how he got his devil fruits but we just had to assume from the beginning that he had them. Other than that as the story progresses I become more excited to reading more haha it was a nice read
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He has that young master vibe that is extremely arrogant and would probably get you killed in a world like Naruto so when he introduces himself as the "genius" of the Inuzuka Clan....a clan of animal people that probably copulate with there dog you know somethings wrong...