/ Anime & Comics / In Naruto: I'm Invincible who sacrifices EQ.
摘要
“Option one, sacrifice the soul, get the blessing of the evil god, and the soul will not die.”
“Option two, sacrifice IQ, and strengthen the physical limit.”
“Option three, sacrifice emotional intelligence, break the limiter, and strengthen talent.”
This still has to be chosen?
Shiraishi did not hesitate in the three options that appeared.
"EQ?
Can this thing be eaten as a meal?
Only the weak need EQ!"
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This is no doubt one of the funniest mcs I've read about. I'll start with the problems of this ff. The writing quality and updating stability. I know this is translated from a CHINESE novel, but the choice of words they spoke in the beginning is honesty weird. Thankfully it gets better. For the updating stability, understandable, but come ooonnn please update this MORE bro this is like medicine to the soul. Pretty much everything is a soild 5 🌟.
This reads as a translated chinese novel. With all the atrocious Grammar that implies. Please say if this is a translated novel or not and if you say you wrote it take a writing class.
Shameful person writing a review for my own writings. ART IS AN EXPLOSION Hehehhehehheehhehehehehheheheheheheh............... ... IS IT NOT.
yea i though so earlier this novel have to many similarities to Chinese novel turns out it's a translated one i just hope that it's not a harem though don't be discouraged because it's Chinese it's really good if you want a light/casual read just some writing mistakes because it is a Chinese novel which is really hard to translate cause of no direct translation and need to be familiar with terms
this has a good concept but the dialogue is straight dudu butter. this feels like[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] something out of a Chinese novel.
The translator should cite the name of the author and his page so it wont be misconstrued as plagiarism. The meat of the story is good. But I can see MTL (Machine Translation) a mile away. Credit the author so he can get more fans and views on his page.
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The concept was interesting but not explained clearly. The writing quality was surprisingly good, better than many of the novels out there. The stability of updates, well, this is dropped so there's nothing to say. However, the rest of the aspects are quite lacking. It felt more like a wish fulfillment rather than an actual fanfic. There's no logic whatsoever and things happen because the author wanted it to happen, not because of other events causing a chain reaction. In other words, the author just writes whatever he/she wants and the story spins out the way he wanted without taking account into the logic and reasoning of the work. If you still don't get it, let me give you an example. Harry Potter fanfic, let's say that there's an extremely talented mc showing his talent of Albus Dumbledore and Albus does not doubt him or try to test if the mc is on the side of the "light". This is illogical, and out of character. But it still happened, because the author wanted it to be that way.
I like the mc I wish he would insult me too.................................................................................................When will the next chapter will be uploaded?
Good! Good! Good! I like this type of Protagonist very much, and also your story development is very good as well[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. So keep going, I hope this story wont drop.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Amazing. The character interactions are simply marvelous. It is so fun to read and has yet to get old. I hope is continues this way. Will be waiting for new chaps.