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摘要
First time writing.
English Not my first language.
Go easy on critism
Short version
Boy......Truck.....Dead.......God.......Naruto.
Mc is 19 years boy so will do things on whims and not much of a planner like yami-sama
In between Evil and Good.
Cruel to many and Good to loved one type
And VIRGIN
And Updates When I'm free
Tags : R18, Mature , Smart Mc , Non manipulative Mc , A bit paranoid too, Action , Adventure , AU , timeline can differ And System, A bit of comedy, Dark later on.
Any similarities between this nd other fanfic is coincidence since i hve sm idea from other fic and my own.
This maybe a slow story, I try to describe Important events in details.
First 2 chapters are not that well written, so bear with it.
I don't own ANYTHING.
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4.8
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harem or no? i hope it will harem because i saw tag +18 lol or mc maybe will spoil the girl 😨 $+wgwuhsgs&hsgsusksjwhhwhwuwuwhwhwuwijajajajajjsjs
This is a good book. Satisfactory for a first attempt. There can be a lot of improvements though. The way the plot has developed, made it seem a bit too easy for a world where child soldiers have a job of killing and capturing. It's great but doesnt deserve 5 stars in my opinion.
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
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This ff is wholesome and that's all I have to say. I don't care about the mistakes in this I just enjoy it while I can. You can't find good ff like these tbh. Just make sure you update daily and sometimes not all at once.
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Great work. I like How Naruto's character is developing. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Shameless Author here. New Journey begins follow Our MC as naruto. I'll improve too so that's a plus Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go
Great writing, descriptivE,good use of cultural references, and very addictive ! Gives a brand new tWist to most isekai stories ive read thus far!!!
And very well I had a lot of laughs with this fic but the author is lazy so it takes a long time to have a new chapter #sakuratrash fb. Xn. Xbj. Xn. Xn.
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This is Amazing 5 star for sure Just update more Greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt