摘要
Li Ming a college student in modern day Earth was transported into another world for some unknown reason. With him is a system that will help him become the strongest soul ripper.
English is not my first language so I can't promise good grammars.
Tags: OP MC, Ruthless MC, Stupid characters, Harem??, Romance(I think), No Proper Story,,,
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too boring, it is true that something new in a modern world people can cultivate, but the characters are too simple and the mc an idiot, is the typical novel that one already knows how it will end, nothing exciting.
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Well it's good story i think 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I'm confused the anime bleach took place in a modern world and the title is bleach system in modern world. Why is the word modern in the title? Are you trying suggest that the story bleach didn't take place in modern world or did you just think it sound good for title?
I like it... Even though I have yet to read it... And why are there question marks in the harem tag? Having second thoughts on it? No no no! You should be proud!
Pls continue 🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🎓🎓🎓🎓🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🎓🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰🔰
I read it twice so far and why does it even have the world system in it's name when he doesn't even use the system might as well change the name. And also their no character development literally the daughter treats him like **** when his the reason her family is even alive. Seems so fkin force her not knowing that his protecting her family just so the author can give her a cold personally. SPOILERS It gets to an action house event and for some reason he slaughters everyone and leaves a trail to him even though his suppose to be a smart mc. And the worst part he put in a disgusting ass stalker character and his not even funny no point in even having him. Maybe you've never had a stalker but they are terrible people.
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
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I love this story so far the only thing I would like is the story being updated more cause I literally finish it in a day but would really like more. Everything's great in this book
Warning novel is dead author has been missing in action for over two mounths Fuck all authors who ghost out of nowhere Dead sad dead sad dead sad dead sad
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Its great! With everyone else martial art master or cultivator, our mc is Shinigami, too OP! And look at the modern background with tech like our world mix with martial art, its make story not boring.
Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story.
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i like the story .. but i don't like gin 😂😂 ........anyway the writing is very good until now so keep it up...😄 and show us the power of MC 💪💪
It is interesting and fun to read The mc isnt just a mindless idiot and dares to do stuff, i hope he wont give anyone else zanpakutos because just no. But all-in-all its a great story