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Introduction:-
Akira was just an ordinary boy who loved anime and dreamed of one day becoming a hero. But his life was tragically cut short when he was hit by a car while crossing the street. As he lay dying, Akira closed his eyes and made a wish, hoping that he could be reborn in a world where he could fulfill his dream.
Little did he know that his wish would be granted in a way he never imagined. Akira awoke to find himself in a strange and unfamiliar world, surrounded by towering buildings and a sky filled with stars. He soon discovered that he had been reincarnated as Pain, a powerful and feared villain from the anime world of My Hero Academia.
At first, Akira was overwhelmed by his new power and the responsibility that came with it. But as he began to explore this new world and interact with the other characters, he realized that he had been given a second chance to fulfill his dream of becoming a hero. However, he would have to navigate the treacherous waters of villainy and heroism, all while keeping his true identity as an otherworld human a secret.
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honestly the good thing about the story is the concept of a pain in mha, it could have been a good story if the chapters were more developed, they seem more like sketches of ideas written quickly, although you can always use this to make a rewrite in the future, It's just my personal recommendation, I give you 3.8 stars because I know how difficult it is to write, well good luck
just want to know are you gonna leave this novel middle or something in future. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
the concept is nice like any other type of "reincarnated in (....) as (....) FF" but please where the fudge pain has all thoose kekkei genkai, where the fugde did he learn 8 gate, please be realistic open pain fandom to see his chakra nature and then you can start from there build your own jutsu. and the stories so far is pretty meh, just the skeleton of the narration no detail no explanation
Weakly, the main character hides his powers, why? If Payne is even physically stronger than the same Almighty, and if you use Rinnegan's abilities, he will absolutely become the strongest and invincible.
honestly I'm disappointed the way the character pain just folded like that despite his ability
Pretty good um the chapters are too short tho 🧠🎃😂😂🎃🧠🎃🎃🎃🧠🧠🧠🎃🎃🎃🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠🎃🎃🎃🎃🧠🎃🎃🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠🎃🧠🧠
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Great start and has potential. I hope he stays anti-hero and have a mini harem. Android 18 in harem pls. Keep up the good work and update more pls!
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