/ Anime & Comics / in marvel with gacha
摘要
start from chapter 19.
The story is under rewrite so you can start from start to get idea or start after the skip part.
Mc got transmigrated in marvel au and got gacha
any character other than mc belong to their original owner
this is a fanfiction
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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*sigh* after the first 13 chapters the story became trash ( no offense) you should have carried on with the momentum you were going with on 13th chapter , no you talking about harem and shit 🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶🚶
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Good,i hope update more.thank you . .............................................................................................................
Story has potential. You need to improve your writing style and remove any errors. Also you are making mc op very fast, instead of summons he should get items and on occassion an ability.