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Disclaimer: I don't own the fate franchise or anything related to Naruto. The only thing I own is my character!
I, Osugi Issen, had died after saving a girl I saw as a little sister from a fire. Now I am trusted with the fate of two world's, having the mighty sharingan!
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Please keep the story going till the epilogue.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Keep up the good work my friend 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Best Fate Grand Order Story ever.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This story should get more love than this people cmon at least help with the ratings or some PS😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😦😦😦😦😦😦😦😦😦😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯
The plot is real boiiis!! Keep up the good work ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well. at the beginning of the story, it is very confusing to read it. (I hope the author can rewrite this chapter) then, in the middle of the story, everything starts to improve gradually. and finally, everything improves at the end of this chapter (chapter 16). Oh, wait. for those who judge a story without reading it, please have your brain checked by a doctor.
It's sad that you don't update this anymore, But it's still good, Old But still gold innit? ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ l\ \ \l\ \llllllllllll/ \l\ \ \l\ \____ \l\ \ \l\ \llllllll/ \l\ \ \l\ \ \l\. \ \l\__\ \/////
One of the best novel of fgo out there. Hope author come back soon. Don’t worry about those two one stars reviews, they didn’t even read the novel and gave the story one star just because they see sharingan in the title. Unlike most novels, the eyes are here to help him survive in fights between servants and not to make him op and crush everything under his heels.
Best Fate Grand Order Story ever.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Give 5 cuz i saw a hatter in the review. Keep writing!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
A good fanfic worth reading if you like Fate,FGO and naruto in general. Pacing is good with enough plot to keep you're undivided attention as well good character interaction as well as fate series characters staying true to their personality so far. Character develop is also done well in my opinion as the author uses plotline to drive characters development.
PLEASE DO NOT DROP IT HAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH POTENTIAL 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎
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muy buen fanfic el estilo es bueno y progresa no se estanca como otros fnfics de temáticas similares. lastima que los capítulos pueden llegar a tardar un poco pero por lo menos son largos (?) espero que la calidad se mantenga en los capítulos futuros.
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